Reviews for I'm Back'
pineapplefish chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
I can give you an idea, malchior has an actual human form, from that form turn into a Dragon. Malchiors like beast boy where he has this beast that takes control. and the real him is trying to help Raven, but the beast wants to kill Raven.
Crazycookie2014 chapter 4 . 7/28/2014
Maybe this time the others can see malchoir and then they star fighting but mal gives them all night mares
lovelypersephassa chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
Hey this is eat. pray. laugh. love. swim. read, and i love this story! i can take over it, if you want me to. Check out my profile. I'm a huge BBrae fan and nothing else, so your story is safe with me
LoseratSchool-BloggerAtNight chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
You can't stop. Read my last review, maybe that might spark an idea. Duuuuude! You can quit. Maybe during a battle she hears his voice and then gets mad and goes like in the episode Nevermore. Listen to music, look at fan art(mostly ), read other fics. That helps me think.
Dark Sides chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
Awww don't quit :(
LoseratSchool-BloggerAtNight chapter 3 . 6/10/2014
OH MAH GAWD! Maybe he should get into someone else's dream and make them see Rae's dream or something. Or maybe all their dreams should connect but since Malchior is after Rae then maybe she might be the only that gets hurt in real life from the dream and the others don't.
LoseratSchool-BloggerAtNight chapter 2 . 6/8/2014
Update this story brosive! Please
MorbidAesthetic chapter 2 . 6/2/2014
If there is more than please post it. Was this meant to be the end? I hope not. This is actually a pretty good story. I would love to read more please
MorbidAesthetic chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Okay, this is an amazingly short chapter. I mean, come on. The nightmare was nicely written. Pretty good for an 11 year old. You should make this chapter longer by making the nightmare longer. Add that her friends got killed. Do something to make it longer
Aguilar chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
This is great I so shocking simply great :)
anon chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Raven has the biggest bosom of all the girls, hips as wide as her shoulders and her shapely legs, she can fight at least as equal to Starfire and she was trained by the Warlords of Okaara, they've trained some of the greatest warrios in the DCverse, and Lady Legasus

I always wanted Raven with Goth Boy him like Captain Marvel with Rorek and Malchior his dragon familiar or have them some kind of amalgam like Dante or virgil from Devil May Cry with guns, sword, guitar that makes lightning storms, magic briefcase/backpack/Santa's magic sack/bag cloak pull anything from, but black clothes or like a good teenage Dr. Doom/Lord Havok master of sorcery and superscience or from hidden kingdom that avoided White Martians' ancient experiments and thus stronger, tougher, and faster than Kryptonians like Vartox/Paragon as well as inherit white plasma on par with the Starheart/Shazam's magic lightning or Prince Stygia like kid Eternity, or a teenage Shadow (Kent Allard/Lamont Cranston) or Spider (Richard Wentworth) but like Edison Rex’s Eclipse I or Shine- Good teenage clone of Darkseid when he was still human looking spliced with Drax the Infinity Man and Highfather and Yuga Khan

Sunstone/Fortress of Solitude/Wonderdome/New Themyscira/Thalarion/Mythlands-Cosmopolitan, Multiethnic/Omniethnic/Citizenry of the Empire of the Silver Snake/Gem World/Skartaris/Nth Metal/Mother Box-Element X
Aguilar chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Whoa nice short story