Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lightning Scar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pleasantly surprised this story did actually end with everything all wrapped up in a nice little bow and it didn't come with a promised/coming soon sequel there at the end. I'm finding myself wishing that there was a sequel (or even a few one-shots), butI can at least be content with how the story ended. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying the story so far (and I'm really hoping Voldy's defeat is all tied up in a bow by the end of it and doesn't leave it unresolved with no sequelwhich as happened to me before). That being said, after reading the author's notes in this chapter, maybe 14 is typical for some for their first sexual encounter, but some of us didn't even have a first kiss till w were 17 and more than that till we were 18, and this is from someone raised in the 90's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like ive read this before, on my old account, but i might as well reread it right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You notes have a few errors, Sirius was able to go the bank or had money stashed somewhere based off of the things he’s purchased. Also, the cloak doesn’t show with Revealing spells |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like you’re projecting your own lack of love on Harry. There are plenty of people who’ve had bad childhoods that have successful relationships and thrive. Canon Harry definitely had love in his life and his troubles with girls (if you can even call it that) is normal in adolescent kids… if you want your version of Harry to have no connections, just say that. There’s no need to pretend like him have a happy marriage and good relationships with friends is impossible. Also, I’m your story he has 2 adults that are taking him away so he should definitely have good relationships based off of your requirements |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing story! I really did enjoy it! |
![]() ![]() Dam this annie is a right dickhead |
![]() ![]() You fucking love America huh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that more people are calling Sirius snuffles, ive only seen it in one other story and it’s great |
![]() ![]() Magnificent story! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my second time reading and it is better than the firzt time! Hope Harry and Hermione can mend some fences! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazing story! I am sorry about Hermione, though, but I love what happened to Dumbledork. Great stuff. Thanks so much |
![]() ![]() One definition of a mugwump is someone who doesn't take a side in political affairs, holding themselves aloof. So, I'm guessing a position sort of like the US Speaker of the House of Representatives or the British Speaker of the House of Commons. There are several other definitions, none of which really apply to a world-wide political body like the ICW. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a warning for anyone who wants to read this: There is a serious overuse of parentheses, averaging some 20 per chapter. All the way through. |
![]() ![]() I’m ashamed I thought it was going to be a normal end and my last to you was not all that good, however I must say what an end for Tom. Brilliant is all I can say and well written 100 points to Griffendor. |