Reviews for Fate's Cruel Little Game
A chapter 1 . 7/30/2017
kind of terrible-misconceptions about what it means to be ahead of other classmates in studies. I got really ticked off when you used the phrase "smarter than a graduating high schooler" because it's more like "average graduating high schooler" and also because there's no guarantee that having a high iq equates to knowledge. That phrase was completely illogical-graduating high schoolers have varying degrees of so-called "smartness" and being smarter than someone in terms of iq isn't in actuality very impressive if they know more things than you, putting it simply.

The writing style was also extremely dull and repetitive. Talk about interesting things, not about cities and complaints and studies. Like maybe how the oc wakes up everyday to silence that is too loud or how the sky seems bluer when she sees her sister.

Coming from an academic who doesn't try very hard this was disappointing.
Nicole NightLock chapter 23 . 2/5/2016
Please update soon!~
cloudsinwonderland chapter 23 . 6/19/2015
Nigou! Wahh~~ so kawaiiiiiii :)))) I love your story! (minus all the swearing, even though i do it all the time hehe), Sayu is my fave! Does Akashi like Aya? wahh i wanna know~~ hopes you update soon!
Cassie Star chapter 23 . 6/11/2015
Update soon
Forever In Oblivion chapter 22 . 5/31/2015
Reviewer: 101
Doujin-Maker chapter 2 . 3/26/2015
U-ooooooooooooo! Interesting
VanillaMilkshake chapter 22 . 2/24/2015
Ahhhh. I can read it. I have a fear of more than just eight legged creatures. But wow. What great strength. And awww! Sei-chan cares and it's so cute because he's refined but SWEARING!
Cassie Star chapter 22 . 2/25/2015
Really chapter made me smile after a bad day can't wait till the next your a great writer and I love this story xxx
cincinnatus18 chapter 22 . 2/24/2015
WTH? I dunno what happened, but the text is all 'p style"margin: 20px 0px; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, Trebuchet, sand-serif; line-height: 18px; text-align: justify;"emI really need some coffe right now./em/

That's the last two lines. Everything else is almost identical...
Cassie Star chapter 21 . 2/21/2015
Update soon I really like this story
cincinnatus18 chapter 19 . 1/23/2015
I'm with ya. Anything with more than four legs I'm not okay with. Snakes and worms included. But then I thought to myself, "what if an ant lost two legs? (I also wondered about snakes and worms) Or a spider loses four? They'd be four legged mutants but still four legged, right?" And so, I'll change it to "I hate snakes, worms and anything that was born with more than four legs.” (I have no idea if some bugs grow their legs so I'll change it again. "I hate snakes, worms, and anything that was born with or naturally has more than four legs." (And yes, I just typed my thoughts out.)
cincinnatus18 chapter 15 . 1/23/2015
How is that possible? Unless Aya's born in January, February or March and Sayu's born in October, November or December. But still, it's hard to get pregnant immediately after having a kid - especially firstborn.
cincinnatus18 chapter 10 . 1/23/2015
...well...she's kinda...Mary Sue-ish...can do everything really well...no hardships...perfect friends and (sister) family...
Icicle04 chapter 21 . 1/15/2015
Awesome storyline and awesome writing - love your style. Please keep going
Doujin-Maker chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
Really nice beginning!
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