Reviews for Hero Rising
avidreaded chapter 3 . 12/28/2019
So far it doesn't feel like a ride along, which is good. I'm curious to see where this goes.
avidreaded chapter 2 . 12/28/2019
Not gonna lie the detective vision always feels like kinda a bit of a copout. Like a little bit of it's usage is fair enough and isn't really off putting but going full tilt game mechanic generally ruins things. So far it doesn't feel to bad to see it's usage.
Zero Uzamaki Kryze chapter 1 . 11/6/2019
I can’t find ‘The Odd Couple’ does kyuubi16 still have it, did he scrap it, or was it even his fanfic?
chimera629 chapter 37 . 11/2/2019
At this point Naruto being here seems pointless as his presence isn't really changing anything everything is turnt out as it did in the game
chimera629 chapter 36 . 10/30/2019
Hasn't Batman already killed several non humans at this point,and why was Naruto dragged into the last part of the test?
Has your Naruto killed before?
Really surprised that Batman spoke of being a man if his word like an hour after he broke his word to the guy that helped save his life
Guest chapter 12 . 10/20/2019
I think yu should rewrite this story. I know you said you weren't going to focus on the relationship aspect because it's a crossover with Young Justice, but 1) Young Justice did at least focus on the relationship with Conner and Miss M. 2) You needsome meat in this story, plus it's fanfic, a chance to make it your fic.

Contrary to popular beliefs, relationships play a big role in comics, especially among fans, its what makes comics more relatable than a cartoon, without ANY kind of personal stories in here, this is really just a scripted version of the show which we could watch instead of read, actually worse, because as I pointed out you don't even have the personal touch the show had focusing on their personal relationships (whether intimate or platonic), it leaves the stroy rather dry.
chimera629 chapter 35 . 10/16/2019
Why did Batman fall as well when he wasn't on the balcony with Naruto?
How many elements has Naruto mixed into his rasengan and what do they do?
What was wrong with Rebecca that he didn't have enough energy to help her had enough to do all this and that electric attack?
Don't see why Naruto cared about what freeze did to penguin.
They're stupid if they cure joker
chimera629 chapter 34 . 10/15/2019
So why didn't they just make a small hole on the roof or go in through a window?
Is kurama still divided into yon and yang or is he whole?
Why say no when someone ask is that a gun and then say it's a R.e.c gun?
Really three clones took alot of his chakra yet he's summoned dozens to train and fight.
Can any of his student from this world besides his daughter use chakra?
Why didn't the electricity effect penguin?
This shouldn't be as hard as cannon with the help Bruce is getting
chimera629 chapter 33 . 10/14/2019
Why does Naruto physical abilities except healing seem to be at Bruce's lv when he be about mid teir superhuman?
Also a little surprised he doesn't have a baby yet since he doesn't seem to use condoms
maxe03 chapter 33 . 10/14/2019
When did Harvey get skilled enough to sneak up on cheshire,and why wasn't she on the lookout for backup given that the guys they took out were talking about him coming soon.
Since when was Naruto durability so low that a normal human could knock him out by rifle butting him in the back of the head? His physical abilities seemed to be at least low of superhuman during the chunin exam,and the lv of his physical abilities seemed to increase a couple of lvs after his juriya.
maxe03 chapter 32 . 10/14/2019
Surprised Naruto knew those seals and that he would give them to Batman and wonder how long they'll last.
When is Naruto going to get to end of war lv
maxe03 chapter 31 . 10/13/2019
I dont get why red and e the big leagues and he turned it down given he was doing the work. Though will be lose his member rights since it was brought up he's not really a member of the league
maxe03 chapter 30 . 10/13/2019
A little surprised the Amazon's having offered to upgrade naruto
maxe03 chapter 29 . 10/13/2019
Does superman know about match.
Why doesn't Donna see what her twin does and why did farm is add that feature?
Who is financing meagera?
Surprised fury can use the date and Fox so easily?
With whom and when did she with a contract with animal?
Come to think about why can fury fly
maxe03 chapter 28 . 10/13/2019
Why does he think he should harbinger about fury when he didn't know about Donna ?
I thought the gun and yang of murals merged back together yet Naruto twin both somehow have Tianjin and yang chakra.
So he isn't going to access what happy with queen bee
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