Reviews for Hero Rising
KTlovesmoney chapter 18 . 12/27/2014
I Give This Chapter A 88/100
blasterdog chapter 18 . 12/27/2014
Great chapter man
Chaos-PSD chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
Good chapter, I liked fight scenes with Mary Marvel and Wonder Girl, they seemed to be really in sync, despite just meeting. Also, I like that deja vu card you played there, concerning Naruto and Hawkwoman.

Hope Zatanna will be the last heroine to join the Team, if you're planning to have Rocket join immediately in the next episode/chapter that is, otherwise Artemis will start to think Naruto's going around bringing in random heroines and/or villainess'.
pitbull4567 chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
Good chapter
Anime hotty lover.18 chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
ok
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
amazing chapter as always
keep up the good work
Jebest4781 chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
happy holidays man and it was good here
Gabby chapter 17 . 12/24/2014
Boring ''!'!
Guest chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
Good chapter
Chaos-PSD chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
Great chapter Lone Wolf, getting more development between Naruto and his ladies is always good. Plus, getting one reunion between sisters with another on the way and Mary Marvel joining the Team, for an original chapter that's an impressive feat.

Keep it up, hope we'll see other O.C's, chapters not characters, in the future, and hopefully Killer Frost will be up for parole soon.
Anime hotty lover.18 chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
Sweeeeeeet this was so worth the wait
jackseaweedjackson chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
Good chapter. Keep up the good work
zerozeno chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
Nice chapter loved it. I still dont think roy should have a pairing but thats just me. And i keep thinking this fic is missing something but couldn't figure it out but i finally did it needs lemons not one every chapter but a few for each girl naruto has
Culaio chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
Interesting chapter I mostly enjoyed reading it :). Both parts with Jade and Crystal were really great :).

Sadly I must say that this chapter didnt change my opnion about roy x blackfire pairing, it still feels forced :(.

Keep up the good work.
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