Reviews for Hero Rising
pitbull4567 chapter 17 . 12/16/2014
Good chapter
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 17 . 12/16/2014
great chapter as always.
i dont mind that it takes so long, its going to be worth it...

keep up the good work as always
blasterdog chapter 17 . 12/16/2014
The squads getting solid and red arrow's less of a prick, freakin lovin this story
Jebest4781 chapter 17 . 12/16/2014
This was a good chapter and great in your first OC one for this story
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 17 . 12/16/2014
not bad
exillion chapter 3 . 12/16/2014
What a clusterfuck of a story.
exillion chapter 2 . 12/16/2014
Holy fucking hell dude your dialogue SUCKS. Fix the damn thing because I have no idea who the fuck is talking to whom.
Culaio chapter 16 . 12/14/2014
Interesting chapter I mostly enjoyed reading it :). Action and interactions were great like always, Only thing that I dont like is the fact that you are planing to pair blackfire with "Roy" since narutoxblackfire(along with narutoxstarfire and narutoxraven) is among my favorite DC crossover pairings, I find blackfire much more interesting then Jade which is reason why I dont like you rather pair jade with naruto then blackfire.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 16 . 12/10/2014
That kid'll be fun:)
Fan chapter 16 . 12/2/2014
About blackfire maybe you can make her like neutral (switch sides like Blade) but nice with her sister that is my opinion.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/2/2014
Not bad, but it felt rushed.
KTlovesmoney chapter 16 . 12/3/2014
I Give This Chapter A 86/100
pitbull4567 chapter 16 . 12/1/2014
Good chapter
Chaos-PSD chapter 16 . 12/1/2014
Great chapter Lone Wolf, loved the way Naruto took center stage as leader of the Team.
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 16 . 12/1/2014
ok
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