Reviews for Hero Rising
Unnatural Reader chapter 4 . 6/8/2014
Awesome job, all I'm gonna say cause it's 2:20 am so I'm going to sleep
Jebest4781 chapter 4 . 6/8/2014
good rendition of the episode and things will get more fun on the coming ones
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 4 . 6/8/2014
amazing chapter as always.
keep up the good work
regfurby chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
Looks pretty good.

Having Naruto as an actual (unofficial) member of the Justice League while giving him a reason to hang around Young Justice is interesting, especially when he's an adult in a teen's body and has the maturity and authority to match. Those 'just another new teen hero' stories tend to get rather old quickly.

The Diana x Naruto pairing was kinda unexpected, but looking forward to seeing how you make it work. Also wondering how Naruto is so easily accepted in the Amazonian society. Will that be covered in a flashback or something?

Keep up the great writing!
Cf96 chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
Guest chapter 3 . 5/27/2014
Good chapter.
Unnatural Reader chapter 3 . 5/27/2014
Awesome job, loved his you incorporated naruto and Donna into the story line
Please continue
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 3 . 5/27/2014
Not bad
NinjaFang1331 chapter 3 . 5/27/2014
Nice job with the chapter of this story.
Jebest4781 chapter 3 . 5/27/2014
enjoyed the chapter on what I did to help out on the details. can't wait for more on the great story ideas
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 2 . 5/26/2014
Not bad.
umbra proeliator chapter 2 . 5/26/2014
Please continue this store. I like this one.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
jayroforr01 chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
Nice start, very interesting with the Naruto has a daughter angle.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
I'll be frank, this is pretty uninteresting. There really isn't much flare in your writing and most of it feels like you rehashing episodes instead of showing how Naruto changes the universe by him being there. That and without any buildup at all, the relationships just seem weird.
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