Reviews for Hero Rising
Guest chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
MILF MILF MILF OMILF YOMILF. GOOD JJJOOOOOBB
Guest chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
Ty KIC
shadespace chapter 2 . 5/20/2014
Nice chapter man you changed things up a bit which is nice. I only disliked one thing this chapter. And that's the authors note confirming the starfirexrobin pairing I wanted to cry I was so htipped up that Stafford might get with naruto only for those hopes to crash and burn lol but great chapter though can he already get raven
NinjaFang1331 chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
Nice I think that Robin and starfire would make a great pairing.
ddcj1990 chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
Not bad I enjoy how this chapter turned out I wonder will Starfire be in Naruto's harem
Unnatural Reader chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
Damn starfire is here, wow
I expected some teen titans people: slade, cyborg, or villains but not starfire
Great job
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
Nice battle!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
Awesome beginning!
Anon-Echo98 chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
May i suggest something with the Mister Twister suit?
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
mmmm very nice
seeker of true anime fan fic chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
Well stars with robin aw phooy on that hoped she b with naruto but ce la vi finally another chapter of ninja do hope its good take care seeker has spoken
Karlos1234ify chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
Epic things be happening.
Naruto's harem increases further.
flamenvy963 chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
I really wish you would edit the whole clan law line, feels like a cop-out. But, I understand it would be hard to actually explain his relationships. I also wish you would out search; "_" Ruins the reading. Other than that good job.
DCMatriXHunter chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
And you incorporated one of the most influential romance Robin has ever had into YJ. Not bad. It'll make things interesting later on having another member of the Team
Jebest4781 chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
chapter still turned out great as always and was fun working on the story process for this to see what great changes can be made
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