|Reviews for Chalk Outline|
| excessivelyperky chapter 44 . 12/31/2019
Remus *could* tutor other students to raise some money, or make chocolate for his fellow addicts, but that would mean he actually did something to show his gratitude, and sadly, he doesn't have a good record for that. At least he is really grateful, and that's a nice change from the way Snape is usually treated.
But why did Remus tell James about the potion and how expensive it was if he didn't want James to help pay for it?
Still, Remus is right about Peter. Treating him like an inferior is how Peter got to be where he was, and it looks like now they're being even worse.
| excessivelyperky chapter 43 . 11/3/2019
Yay, the potion worked! And now Snape has a serious ally among the Marauders, much more reliable than James (whose pride will always get in the way).
I love the way Remus tried to lick Snape's face...
| Someguy the anon chapter 21 . 11/3/2019
Mr. Evans: wait a second... your grown as man trapped in a teenage body *pulls up sleeve* there is no morally wrong thing about hitting a grown ass man who doesnt tell you your FUCKING WIFE IS DYING
| Someguy the anon chapter 14 . 11/3/2019
I'm not going to lynch you dont worry, now hold still I dont want to get any of this tar on me
| Guest chapter 83 . 10/30/2019
Update, Update, Update!
| speedsONEandONLY chapter 83 . 10/11/2019
I wonder if
any of the rats looked
And if anyone noticed...
| fan girl 666 chapter 83 . 10/10/2019
have to give James a lot of appreciation in this chapter for destroying the Horcrux
| Palmakerekes chapter 83 . 10/10/2019
Newwww chapter, fantastic ... fantastic ...James killed the horcrux...good.
| Cukika chapter 83 . 10/10/2019
Very interesting chapter! A chapter of hope!
| Macskamici chapter 83 . 10/9/2019
GREAT STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE!
| Puskas chapter 83 . 10/9/2019
Very strong chapter! The Diadem, the horcrux is down. James did it!
| Matyaska chapter 83 . 10/9/2019
Very good new chapter!
| Lupinfarkas chapter 83 . 10/9/2019
You are back! Wonderful story! Wonderful chapter!
| God-of-Machines chapter 83 . 10/9/2019
¡Are you alive!
| mini pony lover chapter 83 . 10/9/2019
*clapping hands excitedly* yay update! Thank you for the upate! Wow I hope Sev is ok. And huh nice idea to have James destroy the diadem. I imagine that it was quite a shock for his to hear voldemort again,not to mention seeing his older self again. Is Sev gonna be like Harry now,since that hot crux went through him. I imagine it's going to give him some sort of issue.