Reviews for What If
Dobby and Padfoot chapter 10 . 4/29
Your story is so amazing. I really wish you'd continue it. :)
jabarber69 chapter 10 . 5/26/2006
Hey I just read your story up to this chapter, all I can say is WOW! No I mean it, I have been a avid reader of hp fanfic for couple of years now, I estimate I have read over several hundred if not more novel length stories and probably 500 or more short stories on harry potter and I have to tell you I class this story in the top 25 if not the top 10 of all those stories!

This was such a wonderful story, so well written and so believable, its such a shame that it is obviously been abandoned since it hasnt been updated since dec 2002.

Oh well I at least will save this, but alas will have to save it in my abandoned stories file. but thanks anyway for a very enjoyable couple of hours reading this!

I would also add it to my favorites if it werent already tapped out so to speak.
Shadowface chapter 10 . 6/9/2004
Are you ever going to update? You should, this story is too good too abandon, I cant wait until the Mirror of Erised comes into play.
Gohan00 chapter 10 . 5/12/2004
very very good please update soon
Jeanne2 chapter 10 . 4/10/2004
This is such a good story, please don't abandon it!
I don't think I'll be able do...
just update, pretty please!
Okay, I'm alright now...
Or maybe not
anywayz, this story is goin great
Jeanne2 chapter 8 . 4/10/2004
personally I like your style of writing and am sorry that the nameless reviewer was so... like that
neways, keep up the good work.
I'll keep reading if you keep writing.
Jeanne2 chapter 3 . 4/10/2004
awesome so far, can't wait to read more
potty trained chapter 10 . 4/6/2004
Prongsblacks chapter 10 . 3/16/2004
I love the story!Are you goin' to continue? Please do!
anonymous chapter 10 . 3/14/2004
SOBS! Please please continue this story! IT's so cool. Please let Harry be friends with Malfoy as well maybe. I'm so glad Harry is powerful. Please don't make people like Snape, Dumbledore, Ron, Hermione, or anyone else really powerful or in prophecies becasue I seriously doubt that would happen in the books. Please no romance for Harry or anyone else actually. Cool. Thanks! PLEASE UPDATE!
anonymous chapter 9 . 2/24/2004
Great story! I like Harry being so powerful. Do you happen to know any stories where Harry learns the martial arts and is powerful, but doesn't have any romance? Also, you don't ahve to but could you warn me if Harry is friends with Ron and Hermione in that fic? Thanks! Your story is so cool. I love super Harry! UPDATE!
anonymous chapter 10 . 2/24/2004
I think this is a great story! I hope as the story goes on, that Harry doesn't have any romance. Please tell me he isn't going to have romance. It's ok if other characters have a tiny little romance, but please please don't give Harry even a little romance! Anyways, I'm so glad Harry is powerful and plays the guitar. Thanks! UPDATE SOON!
Scattered-Sunshine chapter 6 . 12/24/2003
Have I mentioned yet, that I LUV your stories? *grins innocently*
Scattered-Sunshine chapter 4 . 12/24/2003
WOW! You have TALENT! I LUV this story lol GREAT job! :D
Califaction chapter 10 . 10/20/2003
Heeheehee! Very funny, very good fic! Update soon!


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