Reviews for The Fox and Rabbit
metalsonic2000 chapter 5 . 6/22
Yea he's not returning
Guest chapter 5 . 6/8
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KickassRikudouSenninNaruto chapter 4 . 5/15
I can't wait to read more! XD
KickassRikudouSenninNaruto chapter 4 . 5/15
I can't wait to read more! XD
ThePhenoix11 chapter 5 . 5/10
Sure you will return
XXX777 chapter 5 . 5/5
I really hope that you go back to this story eventually.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/7
Easy way, KILL SASUKE, just go to him and snap his neck like a chicken.. Problem solved. He's NOT strong, he's not protected, he's not hidden.. VERY SIMPLE AND EASY solution.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7
Actually, naruto's training or LACK thereof, makes little sense in big picture view, I mean they need him to be a deterrent to other villages BUT don't train him to use the very power that they are all gambling on! Which seems suicidal at best, and completely BRAIN DEAD at worst! Also before naruto fights kyuubi (after getting the training he NEEDS at almost zero hour when it's TOO LATE) he could only control 3 tails.. That's about 1/3 of his power! That's just mentally damaged! There is NO REASON the idiots in power would be able to justify this.. He's an idiot? Probably because NOBODY TEACHES HIM...It's SELF-DEFEATING!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7
As for your a/n.. well that SHOULD have been a no-brainer... The uchiha? THE BAD GUYS? His pet bitch clan?.. Of course they'd be allowed a pass! It's stupid to think he'd LET ALL EVIL fall at their feet (even though if you trace it back, it ALL comes back to them)... Personally I say BURN THEM ALL ALIVE, guilty or innocent, doesn't matter, LET EM' SCREAM... then the world would begin to heal! I liked you more VIOLENT stories better, they fitted the world better.. This is an Anime world were even the BEST of friends punch each other black and blue for NO REASON... Where you usually say you "like a girl" by beating her unconscious...MIGHT makes RIGHT in this world. "seriously you couldn't tell, I mean the greatest 'geniuses' of the world lie worse then a 10 yr old!"

Kinda obvious what she did wrong back there, she SHOULD have killed the 8 yr old! Best to EXTERMINATE lines, that way no "floating brain matter" equals problems down the road. Same with the uchiha, Itachi and Mitoko both gotta die too, regardless if you like them, because the BLOODLINE needs extinguished! Sure one or two MIGHT be ok (I still have my doubts about both of them).. but what about their kids? Their kids' kids... AND SO ON?.. It's a genetic disorder.. meaning IT'S NOT GOING AWAY..

ROFL, why was he chosen specifically to hold the kyuubi? WHY NOT? What if there was NO REASON whatsoever, PURE CHANCE... If not him? Then whom? the NEXT idiot picked would be wondering the SAME THING? Never understood that question (it's been posed a LOT in ffs)... It doesn't MATTER why.. or even IF THERE IS a why... It's as dumb as blaming the kyuubi for his bad life, the kyuubi HAD NOTHING to do with it! It's ALL the people that's the problem!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/7
You know, the pedo is SOOOO easy to see through, if he says "tell sensei that the chunin exams must go on or I will harm konoha".. Then that tells you 2 things.. 1... He wants the exams to go on, 2. Whatever he's planning is at the END of said exams... This does not take a seer to figure out nor does it take sherlock holmes... It's KINDA OBVIOUS... So IF YOU WANT TO PUT the screws to him, you cancel the exams INSTANTLY. And throw all his planning (whatever it is) out the window! If he was in a position to attack the leaf WITHOUT the exams? He already would have done so, his ego and pride wouldn't LET him wait! Ergo, he CAN'T.. You ALREADY have an unstable jinchuriki in the exams (which I'm pretty sure is an DECLARATION OF WAR) so who else is planning to ship into the village with the huge, gaping, security hole that is these exams?
Guest chapter 2 . 4/7
Ohh goodie, now he's a seer! How about making him a seer WITHOUT the talking in GARBAGE? How refreshing that would be! And oh YEAH DIVINITY just arrived... So the snake's plan? THAT"S TRASHED! The akutski? GARBAGE.. the third and the frog's plans? ALSO GONE, danzo? INSIGNIFICANT SPECK, he's totally WORTHLESS now.. Everyone's plans just got FLUSHED! GOD has made the scene, and she is FROWNING! It is quite LITERALLY "the end of days", the Apocalypse! Naruto, as the one that woke her up and the one she needs blood from, has FULFILLED his role as "the one to change all the shinobi world and bring it peace" and his role as "or the one to destroy it all".

Kira huh? How about the giant walking SIEGE ENGINE of violence and power IN HIS OWN BODY!? It can destroy NATIONS! That whole 5-elements seal was a hax and VERY STUPID.. so NO that won't work... NOTHING WILL! You spend an awful lot of time in your stories IGNORING the kyuubi, but it's GODHOOD within a finger's reach! No he can't control it, but that's because he has the brain function of a GNAT! Even pein who (at the time) thought of himself as a GOD had to watch as he LOST to the kyuubi! Mortals (and yes this includes obedito, nageto, danzo and orochimaru) CANNOT FIGHT THAT, they will ALWAYS lose to it! It's attacking a TANK with a fly-swatter!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
Can we get PAST the "dumb uzumaki" part? That always grates on my nerves! I agree with you, NOBODY is THAT STUPID by birth! (THE WRITER KINDA went overboard and made it completely UNBELIEVABLE with his levels of stupidity!)
xPug99x chapter 1 . 3/26
please update
Tryson chapter 5 . 3/5
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Guest chapter 5 . 2/15
Update please
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