|Reviews for Shadow of the Devil|
| codywhite162 chapter 23 . 9/3
This story was fantastic! I noticed it hasn't been updated in awhile so I hope you come back to it again at some point.
| DeltaWolf2038 chapter 23 . 9/3
one of the best Naruto/dxd x-overs I've read. a lot of cool ideas in it and a hell ton of potential.
| DeltaWolf2038 chapter 16 . 9/3
Naruto not being good at the transformation jutsu sounds wrong. considering how he was able to punch a goddess using his "reverse harem jutsu". it just doesn't make sense. and then there's his sexy jutsu where he changes his whole body to be female which is probably a lot harder than just changing yourself to be a hot dude. while I can see his new chakra stuff not helping him use it, I can't see him not mastering it easily. considering it was one of the academy jutsu
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/9
Bro please continue this story
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 12 . 5/2
Your estimate for how powerful Ophis is is incorrect. Serizchs cant beat her but he can resist her. Either of the heavenly dragon emperors could fight her. If what they said was accurate then Ophis wouldn't even be looking for methods to defeat great red cause nothing but herself could scratch it.
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 5 . 5/2
Welp we got a completely OOC Rias now and a OOC Naruto, he never tried to force his beliefs on anyone and he never thought his goal could be achieved without some blood. The idea that Naruto operated through his life trying to never end a life when he has in fact killed people is idiotic. Honestly I don't know if I will be able to keep reading this if you keep up with this constant clashing you have going on for no reason.
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 4 . 5/2
All I would really like to say is that magic is superior to chakra, Devil magic is only limited by your imagination as where jutsu's are limited by what kind of chakra you are capable of using. Naruto should be well aware of the difference by now and should distinguish between them. Also I hope he focuses more on magic cause it can take him to new limits. Lastly I truly fail to understand why he is so combative with Rias, so far it just feels like you are buying into idiotic fandom ideas born from the Anime which leaves out half the details. I also fail to understand why Naruto had any problem with how Rias killed Viser, all he would view it as is a cleaner more painless way of killing someone.
| tarrangar chapter 5 . 4/20
This is such bullshit, why is Naruto deliberately letting Asia die? Sure she's resurrected, but that comes with a cost, Naruto isn't the type to just let such things happen for convenience.
| Keithbear666 chapter 9 . 12/6/2022
Naruto would lose to ophis without fail. And 9 times out of ten lose to sirzechs when he goes full power. But if we compare Naruto to the dxd verse, I would say that if Naruto was at full power after the fourth Shinobi war, then only super Devil and up could beat him with 99-100% certainty. He still would have a chance at winning simply because a fight isn't won on base power alone, and Naruto has proven to be cunning and crafty with what he has. But now he doesn't have sage mode, and as such doesn't have the chakra cloak, but in exchange has all the eight gates open. Now that still gives him the upper hand, simply because that means his base power is the same as guy vs six paths Madara, or has the potential to reach that level. Now take his already very powerful base power and add that on top of it, and you get someone who could physically crush most people. He is not unbeatable though. There are many in the dxd verse who could put up a massive fight if not beat him simply because they are more skilled or more unique in their powers. Especially now when he has to retrain himself to reach his past level if not surpass it. I love the story so far, but this next part with reizer will decide if I still love it, or it becomes painful to continue reading.
| Keithbear666 chapter 4 . 12/5/2022
I'm disappointed that you have all eight of his gates open, which doesn't just make stronger but also FASTER, without all the downsides, yet you have him having trouble with FREED SELZIN. you do realize that these guys are only truly a threat to humans and weak devils? And high-class is also counted as weak if not common strength? And do you not realize that sairaorg bael is stronger than all of his generation with just speed and physical strength alone? And do you not realize that Naruto now has equal if not greater strength and speed? Take away the strength and leave the speed and he would crush all the enemies in the first half of the show except kokabiel. So the fact he struggled at all with freed makes my expectations of the story go down by a lot.
| IllusionBreaker chapter 23 . 11/25/2022
Can't wait to read what happens next
| ashishroy.akr08 chapter 23 . 8/19/2022
| MoinLeute chapter 3 . 8/7/2022
Just saw this, and it appears the Authors knowledge about DxD is also trash. there is no war currently but a forced peace bc no one is even capable of war without killing themselfs.
| MoinLeute chapter 1 . 8/7/2022
The summary of this fanfic already tells me that this is utter bullshit, i just skimmed through the first chp and see even more bullshit, like what special piece that binds to DNA? there are only 16 and i doubt Beelzebub would make a exception for no good reason and plot isnt one, it wouldnt work anyway since Narutos potential and power should far outclass Rias power, not to forget Kurama, who is bound to him like a sacred gear only he is far stronger than one... also i heavily doubt Rias can fight Madara or is anywhere near his strenght level.
And the way he died? Stupid, Naruto got a chidori through the chest and barely survived, i doubt some ugly light spear can do better in his abdomen. He could have also saved way easier... he could have shunshined behind her and killed her with a rasengan and in case his tenketsu are sealed... dont make me laugth he could open them easily like during the Chunin exams.
I come to the conclusion that the author either has no idea about Naruto and how its world works or he thinks almost every supernatural in DxD are half gods and can crush Ninjas ,that can devestate landscapes easily, like ants. There is so much wrong with this fanfic that it could be very much an extreme AU (more than it already is) with an SI (instead of Naruto) who is also nerfed to kingdom comes.
| Monkey King Omega chapter 4 . 7/1/2022