|Reviews for Thin air|
| Balthazars Arm Candy chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 4 . 8/11/2014
This is a nice story! However, you often miss out full stops at the end of sentences and don't always capitalize proper names.
As for your problem: Posting prequels and sequels as separate stories is not against the rules. If it's technical issues that are preventing you from posting a new story, I can only suggest checking if you have clicked “I Agree” to their Rules and Guidelines recently enough, as it expires every few days. If that doesn't help, I suggest asking in the forums. In any case, chapters that consist only of author's notes, like this last one, are against the rules.
| ravenwings52 chapter 3 . 5/22/2014
How can this be complete?
I don't understand...
Please don't leave it like this...
| Elisa Preston chapter 3 . 5/17/2014
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