Reviews for Pacific Academy
ThomasNealy chapter 36 . 3/26
Ginny herd them say they wanted to enter Harry's name in the cup but she did not tell Harry or any one about it. She could have had hedwig wait and send a message back with her about the new plot
ThomasNealy chapter 22 . 3/26
Harry said, and moved to hold his little owl in his arms

might want to fix the owl thing
Vampireking40 chapter 37 . 3/23
So it seems that through Ginny knows one other secret she has not told anyone about exactly how much danger Harry is in with the resurrected Tournament that is about to take place. Another great chapter.
Vampireking40 chapter 34 . 3/23
So first off another great chapter. Love that Sirus is free. So what did the letter Umbridge send to Sirus say and exactly how did she take his seat. Also does Dumbledore even still have the Potter seat now that he is no longer the magical guardian to Harry.
Vampireking40 chapter 32 . 3/23
Great chapter. I am confused about the abduction by the boys with Ginny and Luna. If Luna was taken and tied up when did she escape to go get help. Also I take it the other boys have all been expelled for there action against multiple students.
Vampireking40 chapter 22 . 3/23
Isn't Hedwig a Phoenix not an owl. Sounds like these 3 boys are this schools version to Draco and his two goons even if two of the boys are much older then one of them.
Vampireking40 chapter 17 . 3/22
I guess Snape got off lucky not being prosecuted for using two unforgivable on Harry. It seems that they wanted to send a message to Dumbledor to stop going after Harry. Great chapter.
Vampireking40 chapter 5 . 3/22
So the deputy headmistress is a vampire. So far after just 5 chapters this story is getting interesting. I have found spots where there were word mistakes where the word is HE and it should be SHE. Great story.
mckertis chapter 36 . 2/21
She was probed...with Legitimacy. I think you have problems bigger than simply grammar.
mckertis chapter 25 . 2/21
Your grammar is shit, and if you dont want people to evaluate your work - dont fucking publish it where others can see it.
Zale potter chapter 30 . 1/4
very good chapter.
Zale potter chapter 29 . 1/4
Oh what a pickle they are in wonder what will happen next hehehehehehe.
Zale potter chapter 28 . 1/4
Great Chapter.
Zale potter chapter 27 . 1/4
Ok that was interesting wonder if this will be good or bad?
Zale potter chapter 26 . 1/4
would be cool to see some revenge some to Malfoy and for Luna and Hermione to attend the same school as Harry and Ginny.
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