Reviews for Pacific Academy
Bobface11 chapter 1 . 7/10
Your story is decent, but you seriously need to fix your grammar and improve your paragraph structures.
I recommend separating speech so that it stands clearly from others.
Blake2020 chapter 1 . 6/12
Zale potter chapter 41 . 6/1
This first part of the story was well written and I for one am hooked an plan to check out the second half.
Zale potter chapter 40 . 6/1
Cool sounds like they formed a small Heard i look forward to how things unfold for them and there new steeds.
Zale potter chapter 39 . 6/1
Wonder if Crouch SR will get in any trouble.
Zale potter chapter 38 . 6/1
nice they got some coins out of this.
Zale potter chapter 37 . 6/1
He's not but that cup is wonder what she will do then...?
Zale potter chapter 36 . 6/1
They should have known better than to piss off Ginny she has a temper that will fry them.
Zale potter chapter 35 . 6/1
I feel bad for the Phoenix being forced in to a bond.
Zale potter chapter 34 . 6/1
Looks as if he has some Seer gifts love how he gets better at his powers very well written loving the fic so far.
Zale potter chapter 33 . 6/1
Sounds like this one ended with an interesting turn wonder if Victor will one of the mares as a mate and produce more Pegasus or unicorns...?
Zale potter chapter 32 . 6/1
Well written a tad bit confusing with Luna as she went from being bound to getting help with little to no show of being freed.
Zale potter chapter 31 . 6/1
OK sounds as if things just got more heated for Harry makes me wonder if Victor will bond to him or if he will die like the other winged unicorns...?
Guest chapter 27 . 5/29
I wish you had written a disclaimer that there was some type of soul bonding in your fanfic. I wouldn't have wasted my time reading it.
Betabryant chapter 29 . 4/23
Can you tell me why Amelia didn't try to do something about Luna and hermione I'm sure she would know and have looked into why two 12 year olds were thrown in
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