Reviews for New Life |
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LordXeenTheGreat chapter 17 . 5/3/2016 Excellent battle |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 16 . 5/3/2016 Awesome chapter! |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 15 . 5/3/2016 Love the side quest |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 14 . 5/3/2016 NIce changes to canon |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 13 . 5/3/2016 Love the fighting |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 12 . 5/3/2016 Awesome chapter... |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 11 . 5/3/2016 Love the betting! |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 10 . 5/3/2016 Excellent chapter! |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 9 . 5/3/2016 Nice way to solve an issue... |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 8 . 5/3/2016 Great chapter! |
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 7 . 5/3/2016 Nice little battle! |
HitmaN007 chapter 21 . 5/3/2016 keep it up and update soon. |
HitmaN007 chapter 21 . 5/3/2016 please make some real romantic scene between mira and naru please |
Lerris chapter 6 . 5/2/2016 Writing isn't really a problem. Plot may be, though it is too soon to tell. The problem is Naruto himself. Genin Naruto would do pretty well in the Fairy Tail world, but you don't have that. You have ultimate Naruto with ultimate cheating eyes on top. The only thing your currently missing is Kurama, and it wouldn't make much difference at this point. He went from appearing from nowhere, to official S-class mage of Fairy Tail to enough cash to afford a house in what, a week? It will be interesting to see if future missions level the playing ground a bit. |
Fireofargentis chapter 21 . 5/2/2016 I love this story, but i fell like you basically skip the entaire festival arc and it has a lot of character development for a lot of people mainly gajeel, juvia , mira laxus and the thunder tribe to name a few idk maybe you'll find a way to add that but... mhe i will find out later. Also a question about the edolas arc, how is naruto going to get OUT of edolas? I mean if he cant get suck in he cant get suck out, using sage mode to absorb some magic? |