Damn! And just when I was truly hooked! Ah, well. The muse croons when and as she will... I hope you someday return to this work. Till then, thanks for the fun read!

Why the hell you brought someone from Naruto's world to here?
I thought only its only him around. You just want a useless baggage pestering like an old couple?

This story has too many dumb mistakes.
First of all, if you can't handle post war godlike Naruto then you should have worked with less powerful Pain-arc-Naruto instead.
You also can't just forcefully take away Naruto's abilitys without any Proper explanation.
Sasuke is Indra's reincarnation. In your story he gave Naruto his eyes who is actually Ashura's reincarnation. So logically Naruto should have awakened The Rinnegan in both eyes, since he now have both Ashura's and Indra's chakra.

And there is also the fact that you didn't give any explanation as to how Naruto lost his six paths senjutsu mode.
I don't have any problem with how you dealt with kurama.
But seriously! Naruto's own Chakra reserves are ridiculously high, but from your explanation it seems like he only has kage level reserves.

Another thing I noticed is Naruto's fighting style. The techniques he used, the way he fights is absolutely different from how Naruto usually fights. A main character like Naruto is defined by his own unique fighting style. But your Naruto feels like he is a average high level jonin from a random village.

Don't know if the changes were intentional, but I like the story so far. I feel bad for Iruka lol, since he isn't considered Narutos first teacher. Props to Cana for finally being S class, unless you meant that she was tried for the S class exams with Freed. Anyways, hope to read more. Keep up the good work!

Best,

An Avid Fanfiction Reader

Lame

Is it no, and then? What’s supposed to happen next.

R u seriously forgetting about kushina and minato, or did ya just skip all the episodes for this shitty series?

I'm sad to see this story being abandoned, I really had high hopes for this story, such a pity.

BEST STPRY F-AJ FICTIPN EV RE

no sage chakra? pffft. so what is the reason why Naruto cant use Sage Mode?

I think it would be amusing if he pretended that kitsune was like his twin or little brother that hated him, but that would be kinda weird I guess, just a thought. Still though I love your story!

This is not bar so far, but this Naruto is almost too powerful for this arc at least.

Nice chapter

Plzz continue

is this story abandoned if not please update