Reviews for New Life
Maragas The Great chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Hm I like if there any Pairing can you do Mirajane ?
Samnamikaze23 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I'm a Sucker for long Chapters and you got me interested! Can't wait for your update!
imgonnadie chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Excellent start to your story. Please do continue to write.
Blood D. Cherry chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
next bro
foolboy19 chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
great start to an interesting story looking forward to the next chapter
Karlos1234ify chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
This is actually interesting.
A few errors and mispellings but still good.
I was kind of annoyed by Naruto being with Hinata, well she is dead now.

I wonder what is going to be the pairing for this story?
Cana, Lucy, Lisana, or Juvia. Erza/Naruto and Mirajane/Naruto pairings have been over done.
alaxbird chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
i like this so far. hope that wasnt the last we see of Kurama
a certain reading fan chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
promissing!
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
mmmm very nice
Mzr90 chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
An interesting start. Slightly annoyed at learning Naruto was with Hinata but she is dead. Anyway did see some grammar and misspelling issues but still good. And if this has a pairing please don't use Erza. She's done to death. Mira I'm mixed on. I'm hoping to see Cana or Lucy used.
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