|Reviews for Digimon Tamers: Twilight Invasion|
| InfernOverlord chapter 1 . 8/27
Good story, though I feel like you missed an opportunity in not making Bellestarmon the there biomerged form.
| AlenDarkStar chapter 1 . 2/6
A cute story.
| Rexraptorr chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
Ahh, I loved it. I know this is old and you might not see my review, but I have the need to comment anyway. XD I finished binging on Digimon Tamers nearly a month ago but have still got the feels from all the Beelzemon fights. Was looking for something to feed into my nostalgia, then I found this piece. Thank you for writing it! I especially loved how you introduced the cards to Ai, with the Tamers' Digimon's Ultimate form, as well as the Biomerge towards the end. I could definitely hear Derek Stephen Prince's voice read out Beelzemon's dialogue as well, ahhh!
As a little side note, don't be afraid to use dialogue/quotes in the middle of a paragraph as opposed to in the beginning each time. (E.g. Have the character do an action, then say what's to be said.) It helps keep the sentence structure interesting and varied. :) Might not be your thing, but you never know until you try, haha!
Keep up the lovely work 3
| GirlWithNoLife chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
This was good for a one-shot. Everyone was in character for the most part.