| Reviews for Tempest of the Fae |
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   bill911 chapter 1 . 10/10 it's too bad they didn't continue to explain definitely see Trevor probably taking on a on one that baby basilisk or luna harry Granger just having rooster calls in the school |
| bill911 chapter 38 . 10/9 why does Ringo remind me of of the rhino creature from Hercules |
| SablePhoenix chapter 40 . 9/30 Not sure why this wasn't finished. If that doesn't bother you, read it. Good story overall. |
| pincho chapter 40 . 8/1 Another story bites the dust. The struggle to maintain the muse is real. |
| pincho chapter 6 . 7/31 I don't know about anyone else but I laughed my ass off |
| Dumbles Basher chapter 25 . 7/18 Buy a grammar primer. Learn how to use an apostrophe. Learn the difference between the plural and the possessive. Get a beta who can correct your myriad spelling/word choice errors. Procure a homonym dictionary and learn the difference between “to” and “too”. Your story telling is good. Your grammar needs work. |
| Molenir chapter 37 . 7/1 Giving Ginny the locket instead of the diary. ::sarcastic eye roll:: |
| fvdv123 chapter 40 . 6/3 Too bad, I liked this story |
| kaskazi117 chapter 34 . 4/26 Animagus forms - boo. Sorry but a tad lame. Aside from that loving the story so far |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/16 Legal Linux: It looks like this story has just come to an end making it the second of 3 stories you have started and then dropped at a critical and exciting moment. You are a really gifted story writer it is such a shame you seem unable or unwilling to carry your stories through to completion. Please try to finish this story and then return to finish your other ones. They deserve it |
| Jenn007 chapter 40 . 3/10 Please say you are coming back to this? |
| fieldsbr192 chapter 40 . 2/27 Such a great story I hope you come back to finish it one day, it would be a shame to not get to live a bit more in the wonderful world you created. |
| Abstract01 chapter 40 . 11/14/2023 The dmbl dementia is getting old. perhaps that is how it is in real life? Why has nobody picked up on or commented about his obsessive behavior; much less called it into question? are the rest of the characters marionettes? |
| Abstract01 chapter 35 . 11/13/2023 unforeseen consequences: the poison doesn't disappear or get neutralized just with the death of the three targets, eh? some of the gold will be spent by then as well. is it only 'share the wealth', or the bad stuff as well . . . and who pays in full up front for 'dirty work'? |
| Abstract01 chapter 24 . 11/12/2023 mcgonagal is quite the dupe. how could she control a class of students if she folds before snape and dummiedore, as portrayed here? |