haha my favorite charcter is joe hardy and my favorite movie is rise of the gaurdians and my favorite character is jackfrost! :P

Ha Ha! that was fun to read!

A actually stayed up till like 5am reading your bio

Hahaha you mak me laugh soooo hard

You are halerious

Ha ha ha ha lol my mom is like fav part was when joe stabed frank with a pencil

I loved this story:) very funny

Lol hahaha!

It's awesome, please do more chapters

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I love this!
And of course-VIjay-woo-hoo!
Can we have another chapter?

The first chapter was better than this one. If you're going to add characters who aren't deeply embedded in canon, like Tony, Biff, Iola, Vanessa, and Phil, it'd help to have some character development. How do they know Vijay? Is he in Bayport, or did they meet him on a case? Even in canon, they give a short description in every book. Including what characters look like. I think it's great that you're writing, though, keep at it.

This is not a story. It is dribble. Try and write a real story!

Update soon

Awwww, that was AWESOME!
I loved how you had everyone be different people from other things, that was super cool- and I had fun trying to guess who everyone was before I kept reading. Great job!
:)