Reviews for Less Than Zero |
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jlpeters chapter 47 . 10/25 it was a long two days that I spent reading this, but masterfully done work. I cried when Louis died, I reread when Black Adam intentionally zapped Max, and at the end... a happy smile. bravo and thank you for writing this. looking forward to all of your future works. |
Roxas Itsuka chapter 47 . 10/18 The perfect end to the perfect fic! I don’t usually get into OC-centric fanfics but damn; this one broke many boundaries. Max was a great character from start to finish. The way he slowly developed over the course of this fic from an amateur thief to a skilled powerful antihero/anti-villain was amazing. He isn’t perfect, he makes lots of mistakes, but that’s what makes him relatable. It’s what makes him human. I also liked his odd way of drawing people to him (positively and negatively) and establishing each relationship. Ultimately, he isn’t a hero or villain but is acquainted with both sides. He is a character truly in the grey and that’s what I loved most about him. Romance-wise Kara was always my favourite because it was the healthiest relationship and I loved their interactions. Her reasons for being attracted to him were very nice too (namely he doesn’t care about Supergirl, just Kara). It was incredibly satisfying to see them get together in the end and have a moment where they weren’t interrupted or threatened by anyone. It’s also ironic that Max and Superman (one he fears a lot) will be in-laws someday. Selina was a great mentor and sister figure to Max and vice versa. Arc-wise, my favourites would have been the Metropolis arcs (because of Kara), the Auctioneer arc (because the heroes had to rely on Null), the Secret Six arc (I loved Max becoming friendly with villains like Catman and Deadshot), and the Brother Eye arc (his team-up with Ted Kord and calling Batman out). If I’m sad about anything it’s that he never saw Wildcat again. That would have been quite an interaction given recent events. Regarding this chapter in general, it was incredible. Seeing everyone play their part, Max bringing many together, and watching Max at his most powerful. Loved every second of it. If you plan on putting those ideas for Max on paper (or Word) you could always do them as one-shots in another fic though that’s just a suggestion. Overall, it was an amazing fic and thank you for taking the time to create it! P.S. I’m surprised Null never countered Batman and Co by pointing out that they are criminals too since vigilantism is technically a crime. Then again, they are superheroes. Maybe they don’t consider it. |
romulocostacs53 chapter 47 . 10/16 Seus personagens originais são perfeitos! definitivamente vai para o meu top 10 de fanfics de crossover. agora, você só precisa terminar tempos extraordinários. |
random dude007 chapter 10 . 9/27 man in this chap bro seemed so retarded |
Maui Wolf chapter 47 . 9/18 I've finally gotten the chance to come back and read this chapter. I've loved this story the whole way through and will be sad to see it go. But I've always kept parts of it in the back of my mind and I will continue to do so. Thank you kindly for your hard work. |
KaraxBarbara chapter 47 . 8/29 In the sequel we NEED a lemon scene where Max does Kara and Barbara at the same time. ...Rose can sit in the corner bound and gagged and forced to watch, for being a bad girl. |
theeelderman chapter 2 . 8/19 yikes misleading title and umm uhh mostly description |
theeelderman chapter 1 . 8/19 hold up sorry i have the best fucking grades and i simply am not emotional nigga u hear me yet these pretty make up wearing girls think their so good like shit my deskmate is hot she has a nose piercing that fits her style her breathe was kinda bad today lmao ngl ew she short like 5'6-4 and im just better but i dont think she into me neither is any girl besides the one that came up to me on freshman year fucking hottie like holy shit 10/10 i didnt have a. fun so like i shot her down when she said number and i was in a group home (not billy batson style more like facility style) biggest mistake of my life fuck dweebs |
theeelderman chapter 1 . 8/19 before i read this im gonna say inserted people should take the fucking helmet of fate and a whole bunch of other shit just saying like wtf dude like literally a gamer fic ith gamers mind can just take the helmet of fate and say hahahah fuck u i have the power of all on my side nigga i have meta knowleedge and power anyways... il read now |
mohamadoulo23 chapter 47 . 8/16 Sequel? |
Thinking Reed chapter 47 . 8/15 Okay, so, this week I was incredibly bored and was in a DC mood. So, I decided to google, "Good DC fanfictions", and saw an old reddit post that recommended this one. And, let me tell you, this was QUITE the pleasure to read. I literally started reading this 5 days ago and that was all I did for the past week. Anyway, the MC of this fanfiction is honestly quite the breath of fresh air compared to many of the others. To put it simply, the MC is about as morally grey as one can get, which is not something you come across often. Many people would say that morally grey is boring for most MCs, however, I had quite a bit of fun following him through his various adventures (or misadventures). His abilities at the start are a little unoriginal as you can tell the author probably took some inspiration from a certain Marvel hero. However, later on they begin to become fleshed out and a little more unique. As for the story, it was amazing. You can actually tell that the author truly did a deep dive into everything DC for this fanfiction, it is honestly really impressive. Now as for the romance, which is a very touchy subject for some people. A lot of people say that romance can make or break a story, and I wholeheartedly agree. The romance is not bad in any way, its just that there was so much potential for someone that was introduced early on. (SPOILER WARNING) In this fanfiction, there are two female leads (not a harem). The first female lead was the one I was referring to above as having 'potential'. This female lead is the psychopathic daughter with moderate-severe daddy-issues of the big guy himself, Deathstroke. Yup, she's the female Ravager, who is also a supervillain. But this was what made it interesting. First of all, I had never really seen a fanfiction with her as a potential female lead before, so it was exciting. Second of all, her character itself is honestly probably my favorite and I had a lot of fun reading the interactions between her and the MC. Safe to say, I was really looking forward to their relationship and maybe a possible redemption arc, only for her to disappear halfway through the story because her father told her (daddy-issues) and eventually be used as a sort of coming-of-age pawn near the end of the story. She also still hasn't realized that she might just love him. Now as for the second female lead, she is the caped girl in blue and red herself, Supergirl. Now, when I say I liked Rose (female Ravager) more that doesn't mean that Kara is just a straight up horrible lead. In the chapters she was in, she was actually quite the good lead. It is just that compared to the first lead and her potential, she was rather stagnant and bland. Again, she was not in any way a horrible lead! Their relationship was actually quite wholesome and adorable. But near the end, their relationship just didn't make much sense to me. (SPOILER WARNING ENDED) Overall, I think this was an amazing read and was excited to see that the author has more plans for this story. However, he also said that he is a busy man which means it will probably take a bit before he comes back to this story once again. And while I don't know his circumstances and do not want to assume anything. I am going to say that I hope he does pick this fanfiction back up eventually because this was PEAK! (8.7/10) Anywho, I have checked out his other works and saw that he is currently working on an X-Men fanfiction, and considering what I have read here, I have expectations. |
bojangles8894 chapter 47 . 7/30 Just reread again and it was just as sublime as the first tjme! |
Father A. Anderson chapter 1 . 7/29 I just finished the story and i have to say it was one of the best I've read in a long time. |
Guest chapter 47 . 7/26 Este fanfic es de los mejores 20/10 y god |
loganhunter2 chapter 47 . 7/26 Finally went around and finished this...I hoped against hope it wouldn't end This story had no right being so good and all your writing is always great hope to see some of the other stories get an ending or keep updating Thanks For Everything Kenchi618! |