You know, I like this. This is nice. Very nice.

We’re getting outta town, yay, I guess?

My god lol, this guy’s getting kidnapped and he doesn’t even know it…probably. At least she doesn’t seem the type, and if that was her intent then we, the readers, would have gotten more red flags… probably.

You know. I’m glad I made the simple search of “dark oc naruto fanfics,” because that lead me to Unfortunate Events. Which lead me to someone who posted a review I related to. Which lead me to check out their favorite stories and authors. Which lead me to check out nearly all of them. I almost skipped over you, but then I read your bio and decided to give your stories a try because you sounded fun. I’m glad I found this one.

"If she hadn't been able to magically heal his arm, he might not have been able to ever use it the same way again."

This little bit right here kinda stands out because a SHITLOAD of problems in the DC universe could be solved just by having someone with healing powers go around and fix people. Mr. Freeze is a criminal because he wants to cure his wife? Boom, healed her, done. Two-face lost his battle with his psyche after melting half his body? Fixed right up, now go back to therapy. And So on. Demonstrating that Zatanna has magical healing powers just begs the question why the fuck doesn't she go around healing loads of people when there are so few healers in DC.

Wow what an ending! That awesome!

This may actually be one of my favorite chapters I have read.

Ever.

In anything.

Or at least in the top hundred. I read a LOT of stuff. Totally awesome though.

This a good story, I just lost interest because I was more invested with max x rose and found kara to be...Well uninteresting. Oh well loved the interactions with max and Jason though.

Revolvers are not pistols. Two completely different types of hand guns.

This, is a masterpiece.

Great Book worth the wait

STAWP IM DYING, DECEASED AT THIS POINT

I frucking love cats

rereading i think i quit last time cos i didnt like the pairing going but hopefully i finish it this time cos if im honest, its definitely one of the best m-oc dc fics

I dont get why the mc doesn't piss off to a city without hero presence , like his keeping up school is retarded to the extreme already but at least move somewhere safer

I'd say hope he gets batman back for he shit but with how much of a wimp he is thats unlikely ever happening