This is how you do an OC. Make 'em weak. Make them fight to get stronger and make sure they NEVER GO TO METROPOLIS. I enjoyed this, Ken. I'm sure that the rest of the guys on the podcast will like it too.

So, good job here. I'm looking forward to seeing Max get stronger.

Peace.

I like this idea, I really want to see you continue this experiment and see where it goes. I think that this has the potential to become one of your flagship stories so to speak.

I'm liking this jump into uncharted territory. You never disappoint with your stories, so I'm expecting big things. Thanks for not giving up on any of your stories!