|Reviews for Break of Dawn|
| Lovepatrolalpha1344 chapter 19 . 7/16
Ok, I'm in love with this. You're an amazing author, and I can't decide which of your in-progress stories I'm most excited for an update on, but this is up there. And I know how hard it is to update sometimes, since I have a story on Wattpad that I'm not being consistent with at all, so I'm not going to try and force you, but dang I'm gonna be happy next time I get an email about an update with your username on it.
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/4
Would love to know more about Asters past ...
| OtherSideOfSanity chapter 19 . 6/29
LOVE YOU HON BUT UM UPDATE
I NEED IT
I AM GOING CRAZY
THIS STORY IS MY LIFE RN
| 14fox chapter 19 . 6/28
I love this. Not too fluffy or psychotic, but more like realistic! I'm verry impressed.
| Blue Denim 7 chapter 19 . 6/7
MOAR I must have mooore! Great work I'm in love with this story. :D
| Partying Painapple chapter 19 . 5/6
Yo, so when is a new chapter coming out? I can't waittttt.
Also, I like that you ship Jack and Aster as brothers, but holy sheep I ship them in EVERY WAY here.
Great job, as always!
| Esax12x chapter 19 . 4/27
I'm really loving this. You're a really good writer and I will eagerly await the next update for this story!
| CharaFrisk chapter 19 . 4/12
Oh wow! Love this story!
| MugetsuPipefox chapter 19 . 3/26
Oh Jack you poor baby I want to hug you. /I/ love you! And, really, it's not his fault if he's never cut an onion before (and tbh I'm expecting onion-revenge tears haha)
I have to admit when I read the AN bit about 'bonding over an onion' I was a tad confused XD
| Moira chapter 19 . 3/24
Yay new chapter!
New chapter and yet another feels trip.
I... I love it but it's killing me here...
...and I want to know how it ends but I don't want it to be over...
I'm so conflicted.
Love it, in any case. Hugs.
| WriterGirl7673 chapter 19 . 3/22
Every chapter you write just tugs at my heart. I love the introspective quality of this chapter, and yet it didn't lose sight of what was happening. Good work, and I can't wait to read more. :)
| so.in.her.own.head chapter 19 . 3/22
Oh my god, I love Melanie Martinez! Her music is the best, and her videos are so creepy doll cool.
This was an awesome chapter, really well written I think. It deserves chocolate
| AFandomLostInTheEcho chapter 19 . 3/22
my heart yo
| I'm the lonely life chapter 19 . 3/22
yep, you're doing good Jack, dont worry... good job, now you have an excuse to be with Aster in the kitchen.. UPDATE!
| monkeybaby chapter 19 . 3/21