Reviews for The Dragon Circle - Da-Kuv t'Yoshuhlnak
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
T'Avri chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Vulcans and Dragons, oh my! This is such a lovely story full of the unexpected; of myth and legend, adventure, loss and new beginnings.
Lady Angel Fanwriter chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Dear Patris Angel,
I am a trekker since the early Eighties and I am sort of a trekpedia LOL
I am very impressed by your fan fiction. It is very accurate regarding the background and the plot fits perfectly in the big picture we all know of the “trekverse”. The personality of each character is very good depicted and after some time they feel to the reader like old friends. The story is thrilling and grips the reader since the first few lines, and you cannot stop but read on and on until the end. Speaking of which, it fits wonderfully with the ending of the reboot. I love the way young Surak interacts with both old and young Spock, who is my favourite male character in the whole trekverse, old and new (even if I have a big crush on the new captain Kirk and his splendid blue eyes LOL) I think you could easily make a sequel out of your story, talking about how the Dragon Spirit settles on New Vulcan and the consequential role in it of Surak, T’Prion and Admiral Williams.
Just one advice: having the story a remarkable length, I would suggest you to divide it in a number of chapters; in my opinion, this would facilitate the on-screen reading, because it is simply too long to read all in once.
All my compliments :-)
Lady Angel