It occurs to me to wonder how & when HP learned about the Order & Grimmauld Place in this verse. After all in cannon he didn't find out about them until after the dementor attack later in the summer.

The only thing i hate about this is the scandalous scenes with the student and the eternal dirt on his image.

Can't he just fidelius those nude photos?

This is getting abusrd with SA, the author is supposed to be an old man with kids. Disgusting

Susan would definitely fit the ancient Potters' modus of marriage

It got boring and predictable after the summer

He has elves to send to the twins, or remus, or tonks, or sirius. Why would you suddenly include ginny to the story,? You forced it, that's why, weak writing, that one.

The school needed this. And such things have happened in the real world because the students had enough. In fact the students and the parents can grade the teachers. And let me tell you many of us failed many in of our teachers. And many were like Snape. A poor teacher is a poor teacher. They may know their subject but can't teach worth a damn.

As for the girls they need a setious spanking. And the staff need a beating and within an inch of their lives. I would never act as they did. And their parents need to also be beaten for this. This shit will continue as long as people are not taught better and punished.

As for Witch Weekly The magazine needs to be put out of business and it Employees put to death harsh I know but necessary to get the point across.

And hearing that you are a grown man and condone this your son isn't learning the right thing.

Albus Dumb-as-a-Door Just doesn't get it. That old fool needs to be forced to read a bible. And see what is says in concerning the guilty. All you have to do is look The part concerning The Execution of Yeshua and the criminals next to him and how one repented but yet still in need to pay the consequences for their actions/crimes/sins. Plus Albus is so dince and full of huberious hec to doesn't see that he is incapable of telling when someone is truly repentant and full of remorse.

If I acted as those girls when I was their age my parents and grandparents would have spanked.

Plus my family forbids dating/courting until we are 18. And even then it has to be chaperoned. When my parents were seeing each other before they married they were chaperoned. And my mother always beet up the boys/men who were hitting on her and wouldn't take no for an answer and hurt them badly. And my uncle castrated those who refused to take no for an answer and raped women and girls. Even went so far as to turn their privates into hamburger and making them eat their own bits. That is how much he hates pedophiles/rapists.

So those those blasted girls should know better but they don't. the Minute I steped foot in that school I would be spanking and whipping those girls and then their parents bug I would be telling my Cousin Queen Elizabeth the Second what I would be doing While also pointing out how the Staff of Hogwarts are conducting themselves and not doing their jods as required by law.

And let me tell you she would not be happy when I am done. One she knows what has been hoing in with her magical subjects. And a lot if people never really knew her but her family which includes her extended relatives who live around the World. But she kept up with everything. Including the American and Canadian branches.

Excellent story
I enjoyed it

Thank you for sharing it with us

A wonderful story!
The final Author Notes are revealing of the overall storyline, I concur that this story used many unique ideas
I loved it.
My only regret is that it didn't include a "Harmony" theme, I love them as a couple.

This is such a good story.
It also gives hope to those of us that read but don’t write fan fiction that with the right idea we still may end up publishing a fic.

A solid 7/10 story... there are too many inconsistencies but an overall enjoyable read. Many good things that you have already mentioned in your final author's note and those were all amazing points.

However, some of the inconsistencies/issues that you could have handled better are (maybe for a remastered version or a new novel): the amount of money he has and his spending and words like billions and millions is way too disproportionate, why the prince would like to sell his land for a billion when it is worth 34 billion (from DE point of view) and why they did not question it, how the girls are behaving is too much of a put off, why he is not enjoying the attention as a 15 year old is also not clear, how he is sharing potter family secrets with so many people right after finding that it is hidden even inside the vault and a kept secret since the third generation, how is ron so mature and not jealous, maybe introduce phoenix greenhouses earlier so it does not feel too much like a plot armour, something about the horcruxes (could have been said that bombs exploded in sirius' house and gringotts), no conclusion to dumbledore

Things I absolutely loved: the scams, the unity of the houses, the hermione authority complex, realistic behaviour of the staff, all the things mentioned in the author's note, saying that harry is just a normal wizard with one overpowered spell, harry acting like an idiot at witch weekly

Loved the overall pace, but could have definitely skipped many things.

he technically shouldn't know about the order yet, he only got told after he got to grimauld place

Really enjoyed this story. Well written and the twists and turns were clever and kept me engage and interested to see where your imagination was going thank you for writing it