Reviews for On the run
Gregorvich chapter 1 . 3/5/2018
way ooc
LilaVanderez chapter 1 . 7/1/2016
Have to say this is a great first chapter! One thing though, nii in Japanese means brother, and nee means sister. Earlier it is said that Anko thought of Asuka as an older sister. Keep up the good work! :D
love toshiro dragon chapter 16 . 11/3/2015
Omg there so cute and crazy lol! Loved the chapter!
love toshiro dragon chapter 15 . 11/3/2015
Lol! Some Avengers time! Good chapter!
love toshiro dragon chapter 10 . 11/3/2015
They better hope they don't get caught lol! Loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
love toshiro dragon chapter 9 . 11/3/2015
Yay teamwork! Lol! I love this story and I hope u continue to right it. XD
Roaa chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
It's really nice and good for a first story, I say u should continue , I see u a big writer in the future, keep it up
flaming910 chapter 3 . 1/31/2015
Haven't watched either show, but this story is so kawaiiii.
myownersmanual chapter 13 . 9/21/2014
YAY YOU CAKE BACK
I am so happy that you're back
I would love for you to continue this story in anyway you seem fit but why would they be on the run
Thyme chapter 11 . 6/23/2014
It was so sweeeetttt! GAH! My heart is bursting in anticipation for your next chapter! Don't keep me waiting please
Assassin of Ith chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Just a thought, but you might want to slap an OC tag in the summary, the tags, or in the first chapter. That way the peeps who don't like OCs will stay away, and you'll be getting criticism from people who actually might enjoy the story.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
Um, yea you got a tone of plot holes here. I don't even know where to start, and you know what I am not even going to try .
Prescripto13 chapter 2 . 5/22/2014
I've always wondered how Kakashi would fare in the Marvel universe!