Reviews for Mountain Mother
PurpleFairy11 chapter 18 . 7/13/2014
this is really good please keep up the great work
BlackHreat chapter 18 . 7/11/2014
Do more! I love it!
HeyThere101 chapter 18 . 7/11/2014
This chapter made me laugh, the image of Fili and Kili chasing Thorin King Under the Mountain through the halls was awesome. Can't wait to see how the confrontation between Billa and the creepy stalker dwarf is and if any of the company gets involved. I imagine Thorin would be livid when he finds out someone has been spying on his private time with her.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/11/2014
I love this story.
Phantom-Mulan chapter 18 . 7/11/2014
I love the whole basis of this story! No whole journey, different actions, hero-worship of Billa by dwarfs! Everything! It really is one of my favourite fan-fics. Bit of confusion on my part though, when did Thorin and Billa start courting for real? I completely missed that part? Last I knew they were only admitting their feelings for each other to the rest of the company and now they are openly kissing and all. Oh well, it's probably me not picking up on things...

By the way, I love the Billa illness scenes! The only realistic author I have found about Fem!Bilbo and the female issues she'd face, especially on an death-defying adventure.
Anime Princess chapter 18 . 7/11/2014
Oh dear, Billa really should have told the dwarves how obsessive this dwarf is getting.
I hope nothing really bad happens to her!
And she and Thorin are getting SO close! YES! And Thorin's pranking-side is AWESOME! I wonder who would win in a prank war; Thorin and Billa or Kili and Fili?
POST MORE ASAP!
YinYangWriter chapter 17 . 7/10/2014
Billa, turn around and get Dwalin.
You know that crap's going to get crazy when notes like that are being left. That's when secret admirer turns to obsessive stalker. And Fili can forget about shaving this creeper bald, because Dwalin's going to behead him. I don't want to think what this guy's going to do when he finds out Billa's a "princess." This could get really ugly.
Ryn-Tak chapter 17 . 7/10/2014
This is one of the few Hobbit stories that I've read so far (planning to read more, no worries) and I love it. One of the biggest problems I have with fics in such big (read: famous) fandoms is that authors will take the movie script or book word for word in their stories and only change the tiniest most insignificant details that never really matter. I am extremely happy to say that your story does NOT do that. I very much look forward to seeing where it goes. :D
Guest chapter 17 . 7/10/2014
Omg that last line. Creepy stalker alert.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 17 . 7/10/2014
I like it
aliena wyvern chapter 17 . 7/9/2014
in vino veritas
thorin is too cute
and I wonder who is the secret admirer...
Gingah18 chapter 17 . 7/9/2014
Another great chapter. Fili and Kili are adorable and mighty protective of Billa. Thorin is a sweetheart. The only thing that was weird, was the anonymous characters pov section. He kind of creeps me out.
Anime Princess chapter 17 . 7/9/2014
Ut oh...sounds like this admirer is obessing and obsessive now! I hope she tells the dwarves! POST MORE ASAP! And YES! Thorin and Billa are together, FINALLY!
dearreader chapter 17 . 7/9/2014
The music is scary. I love this, mystery, jealousy and romance all mixed up. The stalker is going to take his fury out on someone, I think I know, but I won't guess a bag of coins on it. Great chapter, love, love, love your writing. And when can the happy couple get a lip lock worked in, between the brothers and crazy stalker. Please?
PurpleFairy11 chapter 17 . 7/9/2014
this is really good please keep up the great work
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