Reviews for Mountain Mother
FallenDarkness666 chapter 17 . 7/9/2014
Mahals flaming fucking ponies, he is a creeper! Told you I was gonna used that
HeyThere101 chapter 17 . 7/9/2014
Love this story, love the plot. Billa is written extremely well as well as the others. I can't wait for more. Was very happy to see your continuing and going to make this a series. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter :)
laithano chapter 17 . 7/9/2014
if i was her i would have her brothers hunt the creeper out i could just see them doing that. also will he det his hands on her before the guys find him?
FlameingWings chapter 16 . 7/8/2014
I absolutely LOVE the end sequence of events! Kidnapped a Princess indeed!
Lupa Eyed Azule chapter 16 . 7/8/2014
Muhahaha! I knew the minute the Thain was mentioned someone had to say something about kidnapping a princess!
This is awesome!
Cant wait for the next update!
FallenDarkness666 chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
HA! Kidnapped a princess! That's gonna make negotiations a bit difficult. And I really hope this secret admirer isn't a total creep but he probably is. UPDATE!
CrystalVixen93 chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
Love ur story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope u update again soon plz.
Just4Me chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
I like the dwarf courting rituals you made up. Hope you plan to tell us more. Thorin's past romantic history is a little disturbing. Is he serious about Billa, or is she just another conquest? I like how you made her a hobbit princess. Well worthy of a dwarven king.
PurpleFairy11 chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
this is really good please keep up the great work
Anime Princess chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
I wonder what Gerontius Took thinks of the dwarves who rushed off with his granddaughter!? LOL
And Billa definitely needs to find some confidence in herself; or at least recognize that even if Hobbits don't hold to traditional ceremonies of royalty, her Took-line definitely qualifies her as a Princess!
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
I like it a lot! **
FaeSong chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
Hahahaha, I love Bofur's ending line! I'm not sure why it amused me quite so much, but I lost it when I read it. :D Lovely chapter, as always.
Gingah18 chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
Omg I absolutely adore this story. This chapter was amazing. Please update soon.
aliena wyvern chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
fili and kili you mischievous boys
the two last lines just killed me.
Anime Princess chapter 15 . 7/4/2014
Well, this is getting very good! Most fics start from Bag-End and continue through Erebor, but this one started at a pivotal time at Erebor; AWESOME!
I LOVE how all the dwarves were affected, but they all had their sickness washed away by the battle. 'Begging on their hands and knees' for Billa's forgiveness is exactly what they needed to do. Thorin on his knees and head to the floor like a servant is even better; this means that his humble-self is back and the sickness is gone, right?
I can't wait to read more!
I wondered if this would be a Thorin/Billa fic, especially at the beginning when they were only speaking of familial bonds.
And Kili and Fili's gift, those earrings, poor boys! LOL Did they ever get her something else?
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