Reviews for Telepathy And Other Kinds Of Mental Manipulations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this itachi omake was basically identical to the original scene with like maybe 1 or 2 new sentences. I'm not sure why it exists |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh Nico, I LOVE your writing style and the way you process the plot, this ff HAUNTS me. I always imagine what the rest of the story will be like but I do not have the same magic you do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sasu-pon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh noo ended again i hate it why it is soo short |
![]() ![]() ![]() the fact that there are only 25 chapters has been looming over my head. THIS IS SO GOOD! I love her character, I love her schemes, I love her bond with Ino, I love all the little snippets of other characters POVs, I love how everyones mind is different (i don't think people write that enough). I love how she met Itachi (the 'Dango, dango, dango' on repeat was such a cute touch hgfugvhbjk). I love how she accidentally trapped herself in her head and it'll now only be done in emergencies. I think it shows just how dangerous this could be for her. In essence: I Love It! I can't wait to see the school day you created! And the meeting with the Hyuuga. I feel like they might be harder to persuade than the Uchiha since the Uchiha has their 2nd heir saved. Is there a way to get Makoto to teach Kangae seals? Your writing is also such a smooth and engaging read! I think all the characters are in character too :DD love it and can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() As part of my annual "read my favorite fanfics," I came to visit. I still love your story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think so. If your parents can befriend Fugaku and Mikoto maybe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please come back and update :( , I love this story so much . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this is so unique and interesting to read! I had such a fun time reading all 25 chapters. Excited to read more! (Also, if what I’m hearing in the rumor mill about this site not being properly moderated soon, you might want to move your work over to ao3) |
![]() ![]() the mary sue type mc that befriends everyone. Atleast she has a backbone |
![]() ![]() ![]() 2nd read and I'm still hoping you come back |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad it went into hiatus, it was a beautiful story until chapter 25... I feel like crying now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to see you make a return to this soon! It's been an interesting read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls continue this eventually |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |