Reviews for Alternate Beginnings
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 5 . 2/18
Very good
Happy1K1nob1 chapter 6 . 1/31
This was pretty darn good. Thank you for this. :)
Guest chapter 6 . 1/13
Fun stuff!
Guardian54 chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
Wow, ABB and E88 recruits COOPERATING on something?

Mind blown
dragolf chapter 2 . 10/25/2016
...this is the breakfast club!
TheOtherEvilTwin chapter 6 . 8/14/2016
This was a funny and interesting alternate take! Nice work, and I would love a potential sequel if you ever feel like it!
LoveGlutton chapter 4 . 6/29/2016
...well he kinda is
LoveGlutton chapter 2 . 6/29/2016
...i really really hope she joins the undersiders in this universe
Daughter of Mother Gaia chapter 6 . 6/25/2016
Lovely story, I love the way Taylor realized that not everything is black and white, which will be good for her in the long run. I just have one minor issue, Principal Blackwell would not have been calling Director Piggot or composing a letter to the school governors after lambasting Mr. Gladys. She would have been calling the FBI or the police to inform them that one of her teachers was creating and distributing child porn, and then requesting Mr. Gladys to come to her office where he would be waiting for the police to arrive and arrest him.
Mingyu chapter 6 . 5/18/2016
This was very entertaining to read! And yeah, good job keeping with The Breakfast Club theme (and now, if you'll excuse me, I have to find that movie again). I was most surprised when Taylor showed her powers (Aisha outing Brian surprised me not at all), but it definitely fit with the theme.

I would definitely be happy with a sequel, but the story rests pretty well as is. There is a lot of fertile ground for the imagination. Thank you very much!
Slenderbrine chapter 6 . 5/9/2016
Can you do something... I don't know, more with this? It seems like a great take on the Worm story. Please?
orion0905 chapter 6 . 4/9/2016
This was fun.
The Hero named Villan chapter 6 . 3/5/2016
for a moment I imagined them doing the dance and weed part.
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 6 . 12/19/2015
Great story
OBSERVER01 chapter 6 . 12/18/2015
lol! this defnitely deserves a sequel.
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