Reviews for Alternate Beginnings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that was GOLD. KEEP BEING AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good for Taylor for finally standing up for herself. Just one critique of the argument in Blakwell's office: not sure how things work in other countries, in most US schools, the stall doors don't go all the way to he floor. That means Taylor could see Emma's legs and feet the whole time. So she saw someone with the same legs and shoes blocking the door, who backed to where Emma was dtanding when the door opeed. So Emma or parahuman powers framing her. Otherwise, looking like another good story. Love most of your work. Just going back to look for ones I haven’t read yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah breakfast club variants are always fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I only caught the breakfast club bit a couple paragraphs into them being in the library. My dad laughed when I mentioned and said he was even surprised I caught that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An fun read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was fun. I guess there's no sequel happening, which is a bit of a shame, but this was good. I'll admit, the OOCness can often be an issue in your work, but in this case, I have to say that it's quite justified. Review #200. Go figure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gladly's not remotely this much of a creep, but I understand that some adjustments had to be made to align him with Vernon. Well, he's in for a bad time. Not as bad as Emma, but nevertheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Should have definitely called this The Breakfast Bug Club. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a fun read. It would be fun to read a sequel, but I'll make do with almost any other story you're publishing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the story, loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thoroughly enjoyed this. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect revenge using Gladly's secret stash of porn! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Don't you forget about me"? With IMP? Well, her power's not on so it's not an issue just YET. |
![]() ![]() Well that's different. |