Reviews for Alternate Beginnings
H Max Marius chapter 3 . 6/27/2020
Breakfast Clubbing it huh...

Like how you've gender-flipped the roles too.
Aisha as Judd Nelson
Taylor as Emilio Estevez
Madison as Anthony Michael Hall (?)
Eddie as Ally Sheedy
Jason as Molly Ringwald. (Dad's the Businessman, so...)
Guest chapter 5 . 6/4/2020
I would kind of really, really like to see a continuation of this.
Corwyn chapter 6 . 5/21/2020
Beautiful! Worth reading twice. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Spartacat10 chapter 6 . 5/23/2020
Read this fic a long while back, just reread it. It's still a fun, light-hearted ride that I enjoyed reading.

The only thing I'd really have liked to see was more of a reaction from Madison when she learns Taylor's a cape. "Holy shit, I almost got Carrie'd."
Cereburn chapter 6 . 5/6/2020
The weekly gag was awesome!
All together very well done, tone was a good match for what I remember from the movie - although that was a long long time ago for me.
Shepard131 chapter 6 . 4/21/2020
as I was reading this, i was saying to myself, "this is just the breakfast club in worm."

good story like usual.
Spidey-phd chapter 1 . 10/16/2019
Bullying is a huge deal. My cousin was bullied - stolen assignments, sabotaged projects, "pranked" food, malicious rumors, etc. He even got locked into a locker (cleaner than Taylor's but it was a gym locker). He admitted a few years later how close he came to responding with disproportional levels of violence. Looking back he admits that he is now shocked about how seriously he was contemplating aggressively pursuing "justice".
I remember classmates who were suicidal or made horrible choices when they collapsed under stresses and pressures of their personal lives.
Honestly, I remain unsure of how to feel about the Undersiders. Did they exploit Taylor? Did they help her? Or were they broken people in a horrible world faced with a series of hellish challenges?
sean.peatman chapter 3 . 9/23/2019
I don't think I've seen a breakfast club crossover before. Well done on capturing the atmosphere of the movie and creating a plausible crossover.
Everyones Critic chapter 6 . 8/7/2019
This was great. I hope you do one day decide to continue it.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/30/2019
I would be really interested in a sequel to this.
erik chapter 6 . 7/27/2019
An entertaining story.
Cheshirek3t chapter 6 . 6/15/2019
One little butterfly beat its wings here
And a massive hurricane starts there
(-b •-•)-b
Eluvian Camaris chapter 6 . 6/12/2019
This story was pretty good
SwiftyTheWriter chapter 2 . 6/5/2019
I literally laughed so hard I cried reading this chapter.
psp reader chapter 6 . 2/17/2019
that was fun! thanks
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