| Reviews for The Fire Bird Act I |
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   maiqsmail chapter 1 . 4/9 Damn, this reads like it has been awkwardly translated from the other language. Two thirds of the commas missing, awake wording, possessive 's and plural -s used interchangeably and so on and on. And Harry OOC brags about his achievements to people he's unfamiliar with. Yeaaah, pass. I'd rather not suffer through this further. Dropped. |
| Ariane Cullen Potter chapter 1 . 9/4/2023 . |
| Something Random 52 chapter 18 . 9/1/2023 I take a look at my life and realize there’s nothing left |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/8/2023 I HATE THE FACT THAT YOU MADE THE BITCH-HERMIONE BE FAULTLESS IN WHAT SHE DID. JUST GO AND DIE |
| Cindy Reilly chapter 3 . 11/25/2022 Don't worry, life happens, and your readers should understand, there things we all need to take care of, so please don't feel like you need to apologize for it, you get to back to the story, when you get to it, responsibilities come with life, and we all need to learn this lesson |
| Cindy Reilly chapter 2 . 11/25/2022 Please don't take this the wrong way, but really who cares what order you placed the names of the contestants of the GOF, it's your story, you can put them in any order you want, I just wanted to let you know I have already read, the Frozen Phoenix, and the Will of the Ancestor, great stories, and I'm already starting to like this one as well. Please don't let anyone dictate to you how you should write your stories, you are great as an author, you keep doing you. |
| Fellbane chapter 18 . 7/22/2022 The going dark, I have no problem with. After all, extreme changes like these keep things interesting. What I dislike is how Harry is clearly causing Fleur worries and sadness with his lack of emotions and he simply doesn’t seem to care. At this point, I actually believe he doesn’t deserve her. |
| SiriuslyEvilWizardComingThru chapter 25 . 7/9/2022 "So the next Act II will be coming out in a few months, I have much to plan and even more to tie up; you know how it is, so I'll leave you with this." It is beyond time. Make it happen. We await with anticipation. |
| qwertyuiop123214685 chapter 25 . 4/23/2022 great story, please update! |
| Ray Hadrian chapter 12 . 4/16/2022 My dear Bella |
| Ray Hadrian chapter 7 . 4/16/2022 Hadrian... |
| Ltbutterfly287 chapter 1 . 3/29/2022 Did you actually just make the twin towers a magic academy? You wrote this long after we were aware the the American school is called illevmory. |
| Guest chapter 24 . 9/14/2021 I hate this fucking useless worthless darkness filled story |
| Hsitirb chapter 16 . 8/15/2021 Why's nobody seem that bothered by his...changes? |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/5/2020 Yeah gave it another chapter but can’t carry on he is a beta one second then badass another lol it’s an awful cycle for an awful fanfic |