Reviews for Battling The Heat
SpiritWolf313 chapter 4 . 11/23/2017
I came here to read this sequence of smut only. Not that you didn't do good, you did great. I'm just not interested in BumbleBee shipment, nor OCs having too big a role.
freddy.lane.1 chapter 5 . 9/9/2017
ouch though, his fucking pelvis must have been in shards!
Rebmul chapter 5 . 6/4/2017
and pyrrah looses her love interest hehehhehhe
The Boy Who Read It chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
Velvet, think about poor Pyrrha! She just wants to shag Jaune!
akatosh117demon chapter 5 . 8/1/2016 know if I ever break my pelvis I'd rather prefer that it would be done in that way!
WatcherCCG chapter 5 . 3/22/2016
I am shocked Pyrrha didn't go full yandere on those two. Still, hilarity was had, and Bumblebee's always a plus. Fun read.
kyugan chapter 5 . 9/22/2015
i pity roman torchwick, trapped in an underground base full of horny faunus.
Gorsouul chapter 5 . 8/26/2015
This was an hilarious read. Thank you!
Silent Soviet chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
maxstories95 chapter 5 . 2/6/2015
Jesus, i'm not sure to either feel sorry for Jaune or idk
Zelda maniac 23 chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
Ummm, they broke his pelvis...
sdphantom10 chapter 5 . 11/25/2014
Hahahahahahahah aaahhahahaha
Jauney boy the spirit may be willing but the flesh is spongy and bruised!
Malcho1234 chapter 5 . 10/15/2014
I don't know whether to envy or to pity Jaune...
activemars828 chapter 5 . 9/15/2014
I like you. I will wait for more.
weasel AKA boundedsumo chapter 5 . 9/15/2014
the only problem that i have is that when animal's go into heat it lasts 6 to 7 weeks, believe me i know, i have three female cats...

other than that, good i guess
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