Reviews for Battling The Heat
Nick chapter 5 . 10/15
I lost my shit when they said they broke Jaune’s pelvis
freddy.lane.1 chapter 5 . 9/9
ouch though, his fucking pelvis must have been in shards!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/29
XD I loved the ending, oh my... XD hahahahaha
Random reader chapter 1 . 7/25
Well damn, this was so far a funny read, the best part in my opinion was velvet saying "we are going to fuck dear". Damn velvet, she said it so bluntly
Rebmul chapter 5 . 6/4
and pyrrah looses her love interest hehehhehhe
Tron1112 chapter 5 . 5/20
For whatever reson I think of the airheads voice as Luna's from Harry Potter...I realize what that sounds like from an out side view. (Dam you toxic community)
The Boy Who Read It chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
Velvet, think about poor Pyrrha! She just wants to shag Jaune!
akatosh117demon chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
...you know if I ever break my pelvis I'd rather prefer that it would be done in that way!
WatcherCCG chapter 5 . 3/22/2016
I am shocked Pyrrha didn't go full yandere on those two. Still, hilarity was had, and Bumblebee's always a plus. Fun read.
kyugan chapter 5 . 9/22/2015
i pity roman torchwick, trapped in an underground base full of horny faunus.
HINT HINT
Gorsouul chapter 5 . 8/26/2015
This was an hilarious read. Thank you!
Silent Soviet chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Bueno
maxstories95 chapter 5 . 2/6/2015
Jesus, i'm not sure to either feel sorry for Jaune or idk
Zelda maniac 23 chapter 4 . 1/11/2015
Ummm, they broke his pelvis...
sdphantom10 chapter 5 . 11/25/2014
Hahahahahahahah aaahhahahaha
Jauney boy the spirit may be willing but the flesh is spongy and bruised!
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