|Reviews for On a winter afternoon|
| coolgirl chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
This was such an endearing read. I think you captured the characters and their relationship well in this short piece. I hope to see mire of your work on this pairing!
| N chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
I really like it! It's short simple. Just like a short simple moment. It's rather cute with Kiku trying to tell Al that yes it is very wrong but he couldn't help ,that despite it, he'd still very much love to be with Al.
I like this kind of writing short and sweet and calm. Good Job!