I am loving this whole story. I just had to chime in and let you know about the intense second hand embarrassment I had through this chapter... you really let them have it! I had to take a break at least twice. Wonderful writing and amazing storytelling! Love it.

This hurt just as bad as Crossroads of Destiny. Great work

This is by far the best intro I have ever read. Omg the tension between them! You are so gifted

Ooh wow this was amazing purely amazing like...I don’t got words! just ahhh I gotta read the sequel now!

Oh my goodness. I loooooved this plot. All the feels. And such a refreshing retelling, in my opinion. Sure, we all knew Zuko is a dumb boy and was gonna make some seriously dumb decisions like always, but it still upset me. I just love what you’ve done and hope to read more.

uh oh

zuzu's gonna be just a wee bit jealous in the coming chapters isn't he?

OMYGAWDOMYGAWD IS SHE GOING TO LEARN HOW TO BLOODBEND BY HERSELF

...if he's being serious hakoda is in for a nasty surprise from katara...oh shit

aw zuzu tsk tsk

I bet azula has already found aang by now cuz she's that smart and awesome

omygodomygod it's so funny for poor little zuzu to be so jealous of sokka ahahahaha I can't wait to see his face when he finds out lmfao

OH SHHHHIIITTTTTTTTT

SECRET TUNEELLLLLLLL

OH SHIT

Holy schmoley that is some heart wrenching drama and I loved every bit. I might be a little addicted to your writing.

I actually really enjoy your occasional dives into nonlinear story telling. Keeps things interesting and you’re good at maintaining clarity.