Thank you so much for writing this, it was a great read!

What a ride

Great ending to a long series, thanks for writing

He wants to replace the current system, but is still propagating it by having his own coven, with his own Dame, who is still leading him around and making the decisions. I can’t even begin to comprehend it. I’m reading this because the writing is good, and it’s high quality shit, but your characters are retards, and the plot you have has no discernible end or solution.

Took you long enough to realize that maybe you should start thinking for yourself. Fucking twat

Even your main character sounds like a goddamn retard. “Sex is pretty awesome… I’m willing to bond with im whoever you think is best” MY BROTHER IN CHRIST YOUR FOURTH WIFE DIED, PEOPLE ARE OUT HERE STILL FUCKING AROUND AND YOU STILL CANT MAKE A SINGLE DECISION FOR YOURSELF?!

For fucks sake! The only time he ever stands up to do anything is in the absolute most dire situations! Other than that he has no fucking spine! Always impotent anger that never fucking goes anywhere!

Why is he vomiting after attacking literal murderers? Why is Hermione chastising him for it?

Hermione's anger is irrational.

Why didn't they kill the two Hit Witches? Never leave live enemies behind unless you have no choice.

Hermione is no longer Granger but a Potter.

This epilogue wasn't lacking per se, but I would have liked to see a bit more of Hermione to be honest.

Besides that, great end to a great trilogy.

I feel like the ending could've had... more. But great story nonetheless

Thanks for the story. I loved it, even if there are parts I disagree with.

Why do that to Gryffindor's sword? Why?

Well that escalated quickly.