Reviews for Death, Greed, And Love
gateway guest chapter 28 . 8/4/2014
You're in COLLEGE? The scholastic standards in this country are in SAD SHAPE.

I have mentioned incorrect words in past reviews, but for a COLLEGE STUDENT to repeatedly use then(I.e. and then this happened) instead of than(I.e. more than) is outrageous. And I have yet to point out heal instead of heel, and other similar errors. I am encouraged to see that you are trying to recruit beta-readers, as you are sorely in need.
gateway guest chapter 24 . 8/4/2014
I still like the plot. It twists and spins where I least expect it.

However, you are consistently using the word DEFIANTLY when your meaning is definitely DEFINITELY. THESE WORDS ARE OPPOSITES. The root of defiantly is DEFY.(not going to). Definitely implies expectation of ABSOLUTELY DOING something.

Please be more careful with your words.
gateway guest chapter 23 . 8/3/2014
The plot is intereting. However, tauntinsult, TAUT tight. Be careful.
gateway guest chapter 8 . 8/3/2014
Please look up thhhe word DEFIANTLY. I thhink you'll find it does not mean what you think it does. Writers need to be careful, for they can easily confuse the reader.
BashiYami chapter 11 . 7/20/2014
Cute filler.

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BashiYami chapter 10 . 7/20/2014
Meh, it takes all kinds.

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BashiYami chapter 9 . 7/20/2014
I have a strange sense of deja vu.

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BashiYami chapter 8 . 7/20/2014
I thought it might have been Hojo, but I don't think he had green eyes. Maybe 'cause the manga was in black-and-white and most Japanese have darker eyes, even though Kagome had blue eyes.

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BashiYami chapter 7 . 7/20/2014
So you did. Well then. Naraku may qualify as a bishie, but damn if that wasn't disturbing. Was the rape really necessary?
Also, if you haven't already, please stop giving away your plot points in stories - . -

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BashiYami chapter 6 . 7/20/2014
...Please don't make Kagome do what I think you're about to make her do.

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BashiYami chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
Actually, Naraku is sort of hot, is a dark, twisted, tentacle-y way. Alright, that sounded way more hentai than I had planned, ehe - . -'
And the only one I know from the series who has green eyes is... Shippou. Or Ayame. Either option is superbly creepy...

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BashiYami chapter 4 . 7/20/2014
Maybe a bit thick, our favorite Inu-Hanyou is usually way too obtuse for his own good XD

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BashiYami chapter 3 . 7/20/2014
Yeah, I never thought the whole Sess/Kag thing was realistic, let alone good. *cringe*
The fact that so many stories out there, some well-written some... honestly want to make me gouge my eyes out, twist the IY universe and it's characters to fit their own purposes is hideously absurd. Many don't even try to keep them in character through all the different situations they dream up, just tack on the names of the Inu-tachi to people who match their general description, canon pairings or otherwise.

Part of me is hoping InuYasha will get the crazy idea to enter the tournament himself, and whoop Naraku who is obviously underestimating him. Hey, I can dream, can't I?

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BashiYami chapter 2 . 7/20/2014
Oooh, three wishes. Beware the 10th generation wishbringer *waveshandsominously*
Oh god, the nostalgia - o -

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BashiYami chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
Your name rang a bell with me from way back when, and I'm glad that at least 3/12 InuYasha stories you have seem to be completed. Hopefully someday in the distant future I'll get to read your other ones, but I'll have to content myself with what I have until that long-awaited day comes *crossesfingers*

Sin cere,
- DoP -
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