|Reviews for Force Bond 4: Jedi|
| cjstar01 chapter 11 . 1/14
lesia, your father is vader!
vader, you have a daughter!
luke you have to tell!
and I, cjstar01, has the force!
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! funny. next!
| GGMK chapter 14 . 1/13
As usual, I enjoyed your story. Really well-written, and I still love your Luke/Vader interactions.
I was glad to see Luke join the Rebels for a bit, and destroy the Death Star (although it was kind of skipped over, same with the Yoda training, but oh well, I guess those were covered in the films).
My big complaint is...that ending. AHHH! I was really hoping that Anakin would live. I'm sorry, but I don't think I like the ending. Now I'm sad. :P
But over-all, it was a good story, even if the ending is not what I wanted. Kudos.
| cjstar01 chapter 6 . 1/13
Lllllluuuuukkkkkeeeee! You just brock your promise! You in trouble.
no wait baby talk.
Ohhhhhhh! You in twable! I'm telling!
Ha ha ha ha! Never gets old!
| cjstar01 chapter 5 . 1/12
Luke, your lucky that your father is not like the others. Because if he was I sware you would not BE talking back, or (mabe) running away.
| cjstar01 chapter 4 . 1/12
so he found his father. Did not exspect the chapter is called reunion. Sorry I'm late. * nevus laugh*
| mecaka chapter 14 . 10/24/2013
I loved this series! Nice ending!
| Skylanian Writer chapter 14 . 10/20/2013
I absolutly loved you series but I felt like this last installment was a bit of a let down. The story jumped from month to month without much of a warning. Han and Leia weren't as close to Luke as they where in earlier stories and Luke seemed to change personalities a lot. I liked the plot though and Vader was excellently portrayed but this story needs some editing. The last chapter seemed almost empty to me cause Luke seemed all alone. He didn't seem close enough to Han an Leia to recieve friend support and that made Luke seem broken.
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/6/2013
I was lured and ensnared by this in-depth story. I congratulate the author on such great writing skills and can say this was, IS, my all round favorite piece of done.
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/2/2013
I've been reading this series for about a month now, a few chapters a night before I go to bed and it was so worth it. Everything came full circle, well written, I even liked the ocs! I cried a ton, laughed a ton and had a great time! That last line had me sobbing! Beautiful,, perfect etc thank you!
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/17/2013
This story was so touching, don't have the words. Definitely the best story I've read ever.
| Jambee chapter 14 . 9/7/2013
Best Fan Fiction Star wars story ever. Better than any star wars book I've ever ready - and I have them all. When the story first started and Luke was kept untrained, I didn't think I would be interested, but kept going anyways. There we're so many things I liked about this story; The touching moments between Vader, balancing being a teenager and Vader's son, the whole city life, school and interesting people that our main characters got to interact with. Thanks so much for writing, I will no doubt be reading these stories again.
| Merriotrrr chapter 14 . 8/7/2013
.NO! I wont- I refuse to cry during such a beautiful moment. *sniff*
| Talicor chapter 14 . 7/14/2013
This story is just so... AMAZING I fell in love with Force Bond 1 and have read every single one! The moment where Vader calls Luke back to give him a hug is one moment that will stick with me the rest of my life.
You're writing is just so cute and smooth! I really love the relationship between Luke and his father! And I must say... Vader cracks me up! In every Force Bond his witty sarcasm has me chuckling, sometimes I'll remember a particular line and burst out laughing in the most random of places! Now when I read other fanfics I'm dissappointed with his (for the most part) lack of humor in other portrayals of him...
Maybe it's because of that I was left BAWLING at Vader's death! When Luke pulled him out it was a total Simba/Mufasa moment that left me sobbing in my pillow at 3 a.m.! I love your work and I hope you write more SW stuff soon! The world needs more writers like you!
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/13/2013
the only other luke/vader story I liked other than 'the father'; the author is compassionate and makes the characters likable despite not ignoring vader's crimes or his choices.
| Darth-Taisha chapter 13 . 2/3/2013
So Vader knows he has a daughter now, I'm glad.