Hmm…. I feel kinda iffy about this. Things are just going too well for you. Bro doesn’t seem like a couch fanfic writer at this point, not immersive to say the least.

I love that you fucking fuck up Sophia so early on lmao. Alec would’ve approved!

MIKE MIDDLE NAME FUCKIN BADASS ALLEN RIGHT HERE MWAHAHAHA

Oh boy… this is about to be effin’ freaking good. Thanks, Ack! (love your Darker Path fic :D)

Again, this is nonsense about Victoria's evil aura...

He just can't catch a break. Now Eidolon decided to pay a visit.

Contessa is trying to kill him by using Lung as proxy?

Thanks for the chapter.
Once again, I liked the part with roleplaying session.

It's really nice to see Mack playacting "online RPG" with Sveta.

It's a balancing act indeed. Reveal too much, and the foreknowledge won't work.

If I was Taylor and the man I never met before tells me he is on my side, I'd assume the worst.

So, I just reread this and enjoyed it as much the second time as I did the first! I did note one continuity error, although it is small. When Mike first goes to see Riley, it's mentioned that her ringlets had been chopped off and her hair was short, but from then on, that change is ignored and her ringlets are back and referred to several times. Still, a very engrossing story.

'I leaned back and laced my fingers across my stomach.'

That must've taken a while.

Brilliant! I enjoyed every moment of this epic story. :)

hell of a story I read thru a week, damn!