|Reviews for Security!|
| finhirblank chapter 4 . 9/17
Hmm…. I feel kinda iffy about this. Things are just going too well for you. Bro doesn’t seem like a couch fanfic writer at this point, not immersive to say the least.
| finhirblank chapter 3 . 9/17
I love that you fucking fuck up Sophia so early on lmao. Alec would’ve approved!
| finhirblank chapter 2 . 9/17
MIKE MIDDLE NAME FUCKIN BADASS ALLEN RIGHT HERE MWAHAHAHA
| finhirblank chapter 1 . 9/17
Oh boy… this is about to be effin’ freaking good. Thanks, Ack! (love your Darker Path fic :D)
| Adi chapter 23 . 8/25
Again, this is nonsense about Victoria's evil aura...
| Kairan1979 chapter 9 . 8/9
He just can't catch a break. Now Eidolon decided to pay a visit.
| Kairan1979 chapter 8 . 8/7
Contessa is trying to kill him by using Lung as proxy?
| Kairan1979 chapter 7 . 8/6
Thanks for the chapter.
Once again, I liked the part with roleplaying session.
| Kairan1979 chapter 6 . 8/4
It's really nice to see Mack playacting "online RPG" with Sveta.
| Kairan1979 chapter 4 . 8/4
It's a balancing act indeed. Reveal too much, and the foreknowledge won't work.
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 8/3
If I was Taylor and the man I never met before tells me he is on my side, I'd assume the worst.
| Cutiepie29 chapter 54 . 7/24
So, I just reread this and enjoyed it as much the second time as I did the first! I did note one continuity error, although it is small. When Mike first goes to see Riley, it's mentioned that her ringlets had been chopped off and her hair was short, but from then on, that change is ignored and her ringlets are back and referred to several times. Still, a very engrossing story.
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/18
'I leaned back and laced my fingers across my stomach.'
That must've taken a while.
| RevDorothyL chapter 54 . 7/1
Brilliant! I enjoyed every moment of this epic story. :)
| UndeadLord22 chapter 54 . 6/22
hell of a story I read thru a week, damn!