Reviews for An Unexpected Love Story
Emmareeds chapter 1 . 1/2
This is seriously so .messed up. Like, messed up. It seems as if Carlise is a monster who took advantage of a young mind. Victoria was too conveniently evil. Maybe if it weren't for Carli, it wouldn't be so bad but it just seems so wrong that her "dad" is actually her brother. She was waay too understanding for that. Honestly if Carli weren't in the picture, ExB would still be a weird pairing but it wouldn't be disgusting.
OurFamily chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Wow that is different. But in a good way.

Thank you for sharing
morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
I'd like an outtake of this. Thanks for sharing. xo
sshart chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Love it! wish it was a multi chapter of all the in between years
acw1 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
:)

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Hoa chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Love your story. Out takes would be great.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
This story is pretty crazy! Yes outtake please haha. There lucky Carli was so accepting of the fact that Edward wasn't her biological father and what she thought she knew, she didn't.
jansails chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
I prefer ExB, but I will read others as long as it's not a wolf, not Jacob.
I think AULS was interesting & well handled.
The author made it believable, made the reader want to know more.
Lots of families do not fit the stereotypical American 1950's dream, & this is one for whom being different worked out well.
I especially like the way it ended!
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