Reviews for Love is a Fallacy
yamiyugi23 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
I like your poem. I like how it is not only a poem but it is also a story that tells something with so much depth and detail in such a great way. Good Work.
The Light's Refrain chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
Ooo, nice. I really like the language you use here, and how you're able to summarize such a complex relationship in such few words. I also like how the bad end of the relationship fuels Malva's desire for a new world, which ties nicely with canon. The way you use the beginning of each line to spell out the title is neat too, though at the same time I wish you grouped them properly into each word instead of lumping A with It's and splitting Fallacy. But that's just nick-picking: I really enjoyed this, and usually I'm not into poetry. Good job!
twilightwrites chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
I really enjoyed this, even if it was short. I hope to see more involving this pairing from you! I'm actually interested in it now that you've brought it up.