Reviews for Forbidden Fruit of the Juiciest Kind
Foreverx17 chapter 14 . 9/18/2016
Hi, I know this story was updated a while ago but I just read your letter and wanted to say hope things are better. This is one of my favorite stories :-)
unholy chapter 7 . 9/16/2016
this is sacrilege but damn if it isnt the sexiest thing i have ever read oh father i have sinned chriissstttt
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Ok perhaps not the nicest thing to say, but I feel like even though Killian loves Emma he's kinda using her. He's not treating her the worst way possible but in the last chapters it seems like he's only aware of her feelings after he's got his way with her. She's still an underage, still a teen so there's chaos in her mind, she needs more than a physical relationship
Belladonna chapter 14 . 5/25/2016
Stat strong girl and hope too see you soon and a new chapter
3 LOTs of Love
Kristy chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
Please update
esthealice17 chapter 14 . 4/13/2016
Can I just say that I am absolutely in love with this story! It's amazing and just really good! :) love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
Bruh that's my school. St Catherines
DesertScourge chapter 14 . 3/2/2016
I was just wondering if there is any chance of the next chapter being posted soon? I just started reading this story and saw that the last time you updated it was back in November of 2014, which makes me kinda sad cause I quite enjoy the tale you are spinning and would like to see how it ends.
Kristy chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Love the story it's really forbidden love please update
Lotte-Simba chapter 14 . 11/25/2015
i really hope ypu continue this story... it's so great
Lotte-Simba chapter 10 . 11/25/2015
i just love this plot twist!
Lotte-Simba chapter 10 . 11/25/2015
i just live this plot twist!
Writergirl246 chapter 13 . 10/10/2015
This is a very intense and serious fan fiction. It's about addiction, obsession and even going into religion and the effects of what sex and sin can do to 2 people who can't get enough of each other. situations like these do happen in real life and it can send some one on a dangerous path of no return. And some people can't handle reading something this serious, intense and real. This is extreamly well written and I'm personally not so bothered by the sex scene's because it's not all about the sex. Fantastic captain swan story
Idontwritee chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
Hope you come back soon to update this story. I've been dying for anyother chapter. I miss the smut princess
Alynotfromcali chapter 13 . 8/21/2015
I just found this but it's wonderful. You took a silly premise and evolved it into a fantastic story. Sucks that the haters didn't get it but I saw the intro note and had to offer my thought. You're quite a talent
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