|Reviews for Where Angels Fear to Tread|
| Dreannica chapter 10 . 6/24/2005
Ah computer solitaire and Forever Knight.
I like your work, but the ends always seem rushed to me. I've read a few of your other work, and not reviewed, shame on me, and I just feel that the ends are rushed.
but then again, so are mine so it's all good. haha
| MaryRose chapter 10 . 7/7/2003
That was really good and sweet. Nick and Nat belong together.
| Mir N chapter 5 . 11/3/2002
YEEEEEEE! BETTER AND BETTER!
This was so cute:
Okay, I feel really stupid now," Schanke said, breaking the silence, "but…"
"Yes, I am."
Schanke blinked, shocked. "You are?"
"I'm not insane?"
"Let's try for something more intelligent, Schank," Nat said with a slight grin.
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! The reunion was done very nicely...can't wait to hear all those questions Schanke has. LOL-
| Mir N chapter 4 . 11/1/2002
Heh...I like to think sometimes the 3rd season never happened either
Sorry about that one missing link- I typed up my previous review at 6 a.m. o_O... here's the link to the scripts now (Black Budhha):
I WANT MORE, MORE, MORE!
| Mir N chapter 3 . 11/1/2002
Heh...this DOES keep getting better and better! I love it! Now I want a Nick and Schanke reunion!
First of all, here's a link to various Forever Knight scripts. If you want to know what happened in "Black Buddha", click on that. Read both Part 1 and 2: enjoy!
Second of all, if you want to see the episodes on the net, you can go here to this link:
Here, you can download WHOLE episodes, except you need to aquire an FTP server first. E-mail the webmistress if you don't have one, and she'll give you directions. You can just run a trial version of an FTP if you like, without having to pay any money.
Plus the site is awesome!
| Mir N chapter 2 . 10/31/2002
Heh...who cares about short chapters? This is so GOOD! I'm really desperate for more, although I think that Nick is such a jerk for leaving. But what can I say- typcial Nick -_- Poor Nat! Let's see how our favorite pair works through this...
CONTINUEZ! MORE, MORE, MORE!
| Karen Partridge chapter 1 . 10/30/2002
No offense to you, but holding stories hostage for reviews is a surefire way to offend some of the people who would have given you constructive criticism. It is viewed as rude and greedy, and will turn off some of the people who would have otherwise come back to read the story. The columnists on the front page of this site have pointed this out repeatedly.
You need longer chapters. This is barely the start of a chapter. It's not enough for me or anyone else to really comment on. What I would be criticising is your summary and not the actual story; you haven't written enough here for anyone to be able to give much in the way of constructive criticism on.
| Mir N chapter 1 . 10/29/2002
This looks like a good start, however I would suggest lengthening your chapters a little bit. You started off well, but in order to draw your readers in, you need to expand upon your introduction to the plot and characters. This may sound a bit odd, as this IS fan fiction and in theory we know all about the characters and the plot, however I find that even in fan fic, if characters are not expanded upon enough, no one cares when something dramatic happens to them.
But enough of my ranting- I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Can't wait for an update!