Reviews for Turok Deaths Wave Chapt 3
Riddick Constantine chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Hey you don't know me but I read your files on this site and I know you like Turok evolution. So maybe we can work things out. You know what I mean. I know you like games & anime so maybe we can work together on this story. It's called Fan Fiction 2: The Battle for earth and it has cartoons & anime joining forces and fighting evil video game characters. So what do you say. We have a deal
This Sucks chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Oh my god. Learn to spell. Mi doggs naym iss jeeno hee iss kool! The story made no sense at all. Please take lessons before writing anymore.
Chronicle of Doom chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
I thought this chapter of Turok Deaths Wave was a little better than the first. Mabey you could add a bit more info as to the surroundings in the story it would be great. For example: After spending sevral hours next to the dancing fire listening to ogroths story...and so on, and so on... That dosen't mean I didn't like the story though, I still liked your story. But it could use world images. Like walking along a dusty path or something that would bring the world to life . Thanks...T. Z. Scott
Nukkus chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
fucking shit.
Vectra chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
No more. Please!
Kateko chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
The spelling is horrible. I'm not going to TRY to read it, I can't stand stories with spelling like this. Sorry, but, bye.
Anon chapter 1 . 9/30/2002
To be truthful... in total honesty... IT SUCKS!

where did you learn to write like that, nursery?
Conor Mackay chapter 1 . 9/27/2002
O'K it was prtty good but I think that the "Dinozoids" are called Slegs,so apart from that it was pretty good.
SergioSalvadore chapter 1 . 3/4/2002
Oh deary me...this is boring!
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
Lalala sugoi ((cool))
t rx chapter 1 . 4/28/2001
X chapter 1 . 3/18/2001
Good Story! Continue the series. I want to see what happens next.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2001
Not very interesting.