|Reviews for Turok Deaths Wave Chapt 3|
| Riddick Constantine chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Hey you don't know me but I read your files on this site and I know you like Turok evolution. So maybe we can work things out. You know what I mean. I know you like games & anime so maybe we can work together on this story. It's called Fan Fiction 2: The Battle for earth and it has cartoons & anime joining forces and fighting evil video game characters. So what do you say. We have a deal
| This Sucks chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Oh my god. Learn to spell. Mi doggs naym iss jeeno hee iss kool! The story made no sense at all. Please take lessons before writing anymore.
| Chronicle of Doom chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
I thought this chapter of Turok Deaths Wave was a little better than the first. Mabey you could add a bit more info as to the surroundings in the story it would be great. For example: After spending sevral hours next to the dancing fire listening to ogroths story...and so on, and so on... That dosen't mean I didn't like the story though, I still liked your story. But it could use world images. Like walking along a dusty path or something that would bring the world to life . Thanks...T. Z. Scott
| Nukkus chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
| Vectra chapter 1 . 6/21/2003
No more. Please!
| Kateko chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
The spelling is horrible. I'm not going to TRY to read it, I can't stand stories with spelling like this. Sorry, but, bye.
| Anon chapter 1 . 9/30/2002
To be truthful... in total honesty... IT SUCKS!
where did you learn to write like that, nursery?
| Conor Mackay chapter 1 . 9/27/2002
O'K it was prtty good but I think that the "Dinozoids" are called Slegs,so apart from that it was pretty good.
| SergioSalvadore chapter 1 . 3/4/2002
Oh deary me...this is boring!
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/16/2001
Lalala sugoi ((cool))
| t rx chapter 1 . 4/28/2001
| X chapter 1 . 3/18/2001
Good Story! Continue the series. I want to see what happens next.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2001
Not very interesting.