|Reviews for Ah! The following day|
| Gamera68 chapter 46 . 1/19
Good grief. Now there's TWO Lokis? (well, two versions of him, anyway)
And also an emergency recall of all celestials?
This story just gets better and better.
| Gamera68 chapter 45 . 1/19
OK, I must admit; Mara and Urd do make a cute couple. I liked their little exchange at the beginning of the chapter which led up to Hild and Tyr's "discussion" regarding that couple. Also, I kind of figured that Loki's gift for Keiichi was special but not like I had hoped and it was so much more. Overall, another great chapter. :)
| Gamera68 chapter 44 . 1/18
This was a very good, albeit, weird chapter - but still funny. To me, anyway.
I see that this new development was somewhat inspired by your other OMG fic, if I were take an educated guess. But I digress and totally ship those two, together. Another good chapter. :)
| Gamera68 chapter 43 . 1/18
Oh man, too funny. And Skuld's turning into a little hentai, isn't she?
I also loved the "lesson" Mistress Urd was giving her students.
*falls of the chair and rolls around in a fit of laughter*
| Gamera68 chapter 42 . 1/18
I guess I'm really behind, huh?
What a funny chapter and the conversation between Keiichi and his Angel. Oh boy... Belldandy in shiny leather? Also, Celestine and the Lunar Prison were mentioned. He couldn't be... could he? I forget so please send me a PM regarding that issue. Anyway, this was a good chapter as always so I'm onto the next one. Keep up the good work. ;)
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 46 . 1/17
Happy New year! :D
this was an awesome update, thanks :)
| Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 46 . 1/17
BRILLIANT as always!
WELL worth the wait.
| Avatar of Wurms chapter 45 . 12/22/2015
Lind and Excalibur!
Ohhhh! And more stuff about Urd's heratige? We are just getting everything this chapter arn't we?
| Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 45 . 12/15/2015
BRILLIANT chapter as always
i don't think its just their minds that will be "occupied" ;)
and plot twists! you are always good at them!
keep up the INCREDIBLE work as usual!
| Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 44 . 11/23/2015
Brilliant chapter as always!
and YES! they're a couple now!
keep up the incredible work as always...although we all know you will!
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 44 . 11/20/2015
lol. great update :D
| Avatar of Wurms chapter 44 . 11/20/2015
Excalibur uses a sword pedestal as a bed. That's perfect.
Oh lord. Surt is going all conquery on the carnival. This is gonna be good.
Ohhhh whaaaatttt? Loki's talisman stops telomere shortening. Dammmmmnnnn.
Hild's conversation with Surt about Sinmara. Oh dear. Hahaahahahahahahhahahahahahaa
Excalibur choose to be bunny just to taunt Surt didn't he?
Pfffffffttttttt. Wat. I dont even. The mental picture is just to surreal to even process. The bunny and the quad and the glasses and I dont even. Hahahahahahahahahah.
Aaaaaand now half the rabbits face is gone. I should have seen this coming, with the "I'll be back" refrence earlier
Awwww. That was cute. Both with Urd and Mara and with Hild and Surt.
That was a fun chapter. I keep getting mental images in the art style of the anime of Urd and Mara doing various things at the park while various shenanigans go on around them without them noticing. I do love when stories can get me in that frame of mind.
| Melhem Mokahal chapter 2 . 11/1/2015
this chapter was pretty interesting and fun.
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 43 . 10/26/2015
HAHHAHAHAHAA love the interactions between everyone :D Thanks for the update...sorry for the late review.
| Avatar of Wurms chapter 43 . 10/26/2015
Chainsaw swords. Oh Fenrir.
Good compromis on Odal's part
Hahahahahaha. Surt subconsciously emulating Hild. Hahahahaha.
Ohhhhhh. Fascinating backstory on the history of the gods. And the origination of the warrior culture of Musphelheim. AWESOME!
Its a good thing Frigg carries alcohol. That's a dozy of a thing to learn.
Oh geez. Urd's entire lesson. So funny. Cant stop laughing
"Besides, I'm keeping him more than satisfied."
.. ... ... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHAHA.