|Reviews for Just A bit Unlikely|
| Asteria25 chapter 19 . 7/3/2017
Nothing is different...and there are inconsistencies, river said the doctor give her the screwdriver and then suddenly it was the Master? And the Master speak the doctor 's lines?
| StoryGirlWrites chapter 25 . 3/28/2017
I couldn't stand it. I read it all in one sitting. It was brilliant.
| FakeWeeaboo chapter 23 . 3/12/2017
I would have preferred the first option... but this was, like, two years ago.
| FakeWeeaboo chapter 15 . 3/12/2017
You forgot Midnight... we just skipping that one?
| FakeWeeaboo chapter 13 . 3/12/2017
Really? Donna and the Master? I do not like that ship, they'd probably end up killing each other. Donna'd slap him to death... and he's still a psycho. But other than that I love the plot line.
| FakeWeeaboo chapter 11 . 3/12/2017
You already wrote it, but, if it were my story, I'd have Rose have a son or daughter. And when you say pairing?
| FakeWeeaboo chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
so completely skipping voyage of the damned, then? okay... hated it anyway
| bluebird397 chapter 25 . 10/28/2016
Benedict Cumberpatch... Yep. The Master is my new favorite. I vaguely hoped he'd be a girl, but this is pretty freaking AWESOME.
| ladytigerlili24 chapter 25 . 6/5/2016
Sequel! Please please please please please!
| NabikiB chapter 3 . 4/18/2016
He's starting to sound like Ears.
| PanoramaGirl chapter 25 . 2/14/2016
This story was beautiful and well written. I loved it. You saved the Master and made Rose more Bamf. I do hope you continue and write Amy and Rory. Especially Rory he is my favorite after the master. I want to see how you write master with the new companion and the Eleven Doctor. I hated how moffat wrote them and I hope you gove them justice and write them amazing like you write all the characters. Keep up the amazing work.
| Soda chapter 25 . 1/11/2016
I've followed this story fir a very long time in fact, I started reading Just One Second when chapter five was the most recent chapter. I used to check every single day without fail to see if you had updated. Just today I came back and read these last three chapters and just want to say thank you because this was a he'll of a story. Thanks for the memories
| Minato's Legacy chapter 25 . 9/27/2015
XD I knew that it was Cumberbatch, I called it as soon as I finished the "blue eyes" part. Oh god their adventures are going to be hilarious. And this is going to be one of the Master's really smart regenerations and everytime he one-ups the Doctor he's just gonna smirk and the Doctor's gonna pout. And then Rose will kiss his check and be like, "It's okay Doctor, you're still older with more experience." And then the Master and Donna will look at each other while the Doctor whines about being older and then they'll look at the Doctor and Rose and the Master will go, "Who says he has more experience?" And he'll look at Donna and wink and then
Rose and the Doctor will gag over in the corner.
| MomoPeachFlower chapter 25 . 8/6/2015
I almost want to see you continue on into the travels with Amy and Rory. Of course it will be very different because there is Rose, Tennets Doctor, the Master and Donna still there, so it would be kind of difficult. But I can't help but wonder about River, I know she is supposed to end up with the Master, since she knew his name. But she also had the sad look when it came to Donna, the only reason I could see that is if she decided not to stay due to the Master changing.
Actually I really like how you put that in, that way no one died. That would have been the perfect opportunity to have Smith's Doctor come into play, but i get what you did.
Perfect choice for his regeneration though, I love Benedict Cumberbatch
| Lioutenant Flame chapter 25 . 8/5/2015
Oh my various gods that was one AWESOME ending!