I love this chapter! I cackled! Brilliant!

And I must say, although there are a lot of chapters, the relatively short length is just packed with just what’s needed and propel the story forward. You are an amazing writer. Really loving this story.

I loved this chapter. I think recollections are important in this kind of story where the characters have already been moving forward before the camera is turned on

i just finished this story and refound it. there is a bunch of the first chapters i remeber but the later stuff was all new. thank you for writing this. my fave part was the ending where you wrote about the portraits. i love that as it tells more of who did what in a very nice round up. however it does make me wonder if they ever made it to 422. id love to see more of this story in further adventures and i love that Ollivander dinally found an apprentice. the whole idea of wand making has always interested me. thank you for this wonderful look into it even if its not cannon.

off to read more of your stories.

this is probably the third or fourth time I have read the story. It still amazes me that this was the first time writing a Harry Potter fanfic. the first time writing Severus Snape. while he is a little more mellow, near death can do that to a person, you were still able to capture his snarkiness, his dry wit as well as as well as his insecurity and vulnerability. it is quite impressive. I have read most of your stories, I'm still working my way through all of them but I still go back to my tried and true favorites. like visiting old friends. it"s also fascinating to see how your writing has evolved. you have become more creative daring and confident. yet you have not lost the creative Joy of your imagination that just draws us all in. I still want a Blodwyn and a Walter and a Grandfather of my own. And a Severus but that goes without saying LOL
much love and gratitude LLAP

What a wonderful story. THIS is what I’ve been looking for. Thank you for this wonderful gift of happy chance for Severus and Hermione!

this chapter was...mean!
I startet to sweat all over, chanting: onononononoNO, and I have you to know, tha sweat!
:p
"nice" terror dream, you got me!

linda escritora. Gracias por esta maravillosa historia, que muestra los traumas que quedaron después de la guerra
Gracias por dar la oportunidad a Severus y a Hermione de conocerse, sanarse mutuamente y unirse sin dudas en sus corazones, almas y mentes
Gracias por compartir ésta belleza, me gustan tus historias, hasta las que no has terminado. Pero esta historia es especial, hermosa y maravillosa trae paz y felicidad
Nos leemos

Just wow. This story really touched my heart.

I absolutely loved this story and will most certainly return to read it again and again. I really glad you chose to accept the challenge your friend set forth as it developed into something absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

Wonderful stories

My FAVORITE chapter!

95 chapters of pure pleasure thank you for writing it. it was a fantastic travel

nothing at all hot happened in this chapter but that was really hot! Why?

This was beautiful. Thank you.

I read this 5 years ago, and it's still amazing, I love your work, never stop 3