|Reviews for Sanitarium|
| Akhtar chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
I'm a huge fan of fight club and am happy to see that someone's finally making a direct sequel instead of stories that take place years after the book.
What you've done so far is very interesting.
I just have a few suggestions, which you can ignore if you like:
One of the best things about chuck's writing was his transitional style; your story is in third person but it'd be great to see some of that again.
And please, do not take the story off track into complex interactions with drug lords or terrorists or whatever like in the other fanfics I've read so far. Keep the consistency of project mayhem going.
That's all. Waiting for more :-)