|Reviews for Prophecy of Two Boys|
| Tippy chapter 66 . 7/12
Update already dude!
| Huntress of Diana chapter 66 . 6/29
Please update I love this story so much I have read it like 4 times.
| MidnightWolf190 chapter 66 . 6/25
UPDATE! DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO NOT HAVE THIS AWESOMENESS?!IT'S DRIVING ME CRASY
| LittleOwlOfAthena chapter 66 . 6/25
I love this fanfic! I am so sad to see it hasn't been updated in over a year! I hope that you will continue this at some point?
| Demigodreader chapter 66 . 6/20
Hi! I really really REALLY love your story. You are a great author!
I read this story last fall, followed you, and waited but you haven't updated in almost a year. I hope have some free time soon and update! Also, what will happen in 3rd year because most of that is Sirius drama and he is innocent in this story?
| Oof777 chapter 66 . 6/17
When will this be updated?
| MidnightWolf190 chapter 1 . 6/15
UPDATE NOW! I NEED MORE!
| PikachuQueenYASSS chapter 46 . 6/12
Do you know βασιλίσκος means Basilisk in Greek but actually Alyssa is nice so I see why you picked it
| MidnightWolf190 chapter 1 . 6/12
Please update soon! I'M DYING OF BOREDOM!
| MidnightWolf190 chapter 66 . 6/11
One thing I would change about this is maybe make it so that Sally is their mom because I don't know why, but I have a problem with Percy Potter. Maybe Percy gets really close to Tyson and Sally so everyone close to them (not Lily or James of coarse) calls him Percy Jackson? I Don't know, but please update soon! I'm dying here!
| Guest chapter 66 . 5/30
Can you change so chapter and write it faster?!
| Guest chapter 66 . 5/28
I am the one who stole you book...i will delete it soon...but make more chapters or say good bye...
| Guest chapter 66 . 5/25
Lunabeth, is that you? xD
Oh, I know what you're talking about, with the guy on Wattpad, I just came from there and I was pretty sure that I saw "I do not own this" on every chapter, might be my imagination, plus he posted the link on the book as well... I don't know, But what I do know, is that I love this story and hope that you update soon, it is a really good book, and the only one (that I know of) that has both Percy and Harry combined into one character. Do you think that Annabeth/Luna will get together with Percy/Harry?
Oh, and a word of advice, I think (personally) that if you did: "Annabeth and Luna swarmed Harry and Percy into a hug." instead of "Annabeth and Luna and Percy and Harry hugged tightly." sounds a bit better, just a suggestion though, and again, it is only my personal opinion. I love your book very much!
P.S This is my first ever review on
| KittyDitzyDancer chapter 3 . 4/30
I am rereading this (for the third or fourth time) and I am seeing the Wanda for the characters and I have a couple problems. I have studied wand lore, the needy Ravenclaw I am, and I believe a couple things need to change. I think that Charles’ wand should be firmer, slightly springy would be good, because the flexibility of the wand directly correlates to the wizard’s acceptance and adaption to change. This is the same reason why I think Percy’s wand should be more flexible, whippet will do. I also believe Charles’ wand should be much closer to 14 inches. The article about wand length and flexibility on pottermore should give you a good idea why.
I really love that you chose Percy’s wand to be English Oak. It’s one of the three woods i think fit Percy, but I like that you chose that one specifically due to its connection with Holly. I think that Percy’s core should be unicorn hair, though, as it is a usable wand core and it is the most pure core. I believe it fits Percy the best.
If I haven’t said so before, I absolutely adore this book. I hope you update again at some point. Have a marvelous day/night/afternoon/evening (whatever time it is where you are). BYE!
| DaughterofArtemisxxx chapter 36 . 4/6
Can we just all agree here: Remus J. Lupin BEST DADA TEACHER TO EVER GRACE THE WORLD WITH HIS EXISTENCE!